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  • 501 weeks
    yeah.

    Hey guys, this is going to be quick and simple, because I left everyone whom I cared for in the dust with no comment. For those who might stumble upon this some time or if any of my followers are even still around, then here's why I left:

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    2 comments · 234 views
  • 570 weeks
    Bronies, Unite! ~

    I'm writing a chapter.

    :rainbowkiss:

    6 comments · 331 views
  • 575 weeks
    So...

    Hey guys, Vitamin here.
    So, as you may of seen lately, I've been coming online often. Well, that's because I'm back. Not fully, but back.

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    4 comments · 293 views
  • 578 weeks
    The average.

    "Once you're average, their is no going back. You're the backbone of society, yet no one cares and no one knows. You have an average job, earning an average wage. You do your average things on an average day, just being your average self."

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    10 comments · 316 views
  • 599 weeks
    Derpy.

    I'm back from 6 weeks of Army training.

    Yeah, it's fun and always will be.


    If you may of noticed, I've revoked a few, or almost all of my submissions. No longer doing any clop yada yada. Bronies, Unite! will be the only story I do, as that's the most popular, and the one I love the most. I'm still a Brony, don't worry. I even found a Brony IN the Army, too.

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Mar
26th
2012

OC ponies, [URGENT] + [5 Minute read] · 5:52pm Mar 26th, 2012

This is me, explaining every part of the format, since some people can't simply wrap their finger around it, until you do, the story will not have you in it, or be released at all, until I have 20 good OC ponies, this is the rule I set myself, I didn't prepare Your Wish Came True, and this, I want to be perfect, so I will go into detail about every single aspect of this. Here is a good example of the format being used. [Check comments for it, it's the first comment.]



I used Bold, because it helps when reading it, you should too, I also use it in my word document to save said ponies, I dopn't mind having to do this part myself (Adding said Boldness to each part), but it gets ver, very annoying when people don't do it themselves. it's really not that hard, just highlight the certain area, then click bold. Thanks. [I don't want to come across pushy or anything, it just has to be done, this entire thing does, sorry if I am :fluttercry:]


Name: : HERE, This is the name for your PONY, this should half define what your pony does, Speedster for instance, because he is speedy, that is literally all their is to it, it's his main quality, related to his cutie mark and that is all their actually is to it.

Hobbies/Interests: HERE, We all have them, so just fill them out, anything you're interested in/want to be interested in, write it here, if it goes over the top, I will just write a reply, telling you to edit it, it's really easy, if their is too little, it doesn't matter at this stage, some people don't have hobbies, (Or better yet, they don't want to tell them, and that's fine.), just try to get at LEAST 2 in, or don't bother submitting, if you do your comment will be deleted without warning.

Strengths: HERE, We ALL have them, even if you think you don't, you can give strengths to your OC that you don't have, I really don't mind, but you MUST have a minimum of 5, this is a fucking MUST! If I even see just 4, I will damn well delete the comment, and you can't be in the story, I am sick of telling people this, if you need help, just send me a message BEFORE you post the comment.

Weaknesses: HERE, Again, we ALL have them, and we have more of these than strengths, you MUST have a minimum of 10, that is ALSO the MAXIMUM, you can only, ONLY 10, their is no other number, MUST be 10.

Special power: HERE, This is sort of related to your name, and is related to your cutie mark, none of this; Skull and bones for the cutie mark, and the special power is hand gliding. Because this? It doesn't work, all right? All right.

Marefriend/Stallionfriend: HERE, I know you want somepony special, it doesn't matter who, doesn't matter if someone else wants him/her, just write it dow, if you want more than one, then write more down, simple.

Background

Human name: HERE, If you don't fill this in, I will send you an angry message. And remove your comment.

Past :HERE, I want at LEAST, a minimum of 5 sentences describing your past as a HUMAN. You are not in the story if you already lived in Equestria, not happening because of the way it's being written. :rainbowkiss:

Aspirations: HERE, Anything you WANT to be able to do? Even if it's Human, I can somehow make it work, if not then I will message you personally.

Darkest secret: HERE, Do NOT go into detail, if you wish to, send it me in a message. I don't want people knowing them before they read the story.

Dream job: HERE, Want a specific job? Write it here.

Appearance

Sex: HERE, So help me Celestia...
Cutie mark: HERE, Describe it, heck, even draw it.
Colour eyes: HERE, ...
Coat colour: HERE, ...
Mane colour: HERE, ...
Hair style: HERE, Any style, just describe it, I will draw it myself and send it to you in a message.
Type (Pegasus, Unicorn, Earth): HERE, ...

Extra: Any other details you wish to add, write them here.





Do you need to repost your OC here, following the damn rules this time? Yes.
Is their still spots open for another OC? Yes.
Will I be biased when I am picking who gets to go out with who? No. It's going to be random, literally.
Aspirations only available in Human life? I can make it work, trust me.

Any others, message me, and thanks for reading.

P.S.

If I came across strong and forceful, I am very, VERY sorry! :fluttercry:

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Comments ( 8 )

A GOOD EXAMPLE.

Name: Speedster.
Hobbies/Interests: Reading, writing, flying, talking, running, gaming, music, training.
Strengths: Sonic Fireboom, durable, athletically strong, tolerant, honest.
Weaknesses: Socially awkward, unacceptable, shy, freezes up around mares, flashbacks, pushes self too much, can’t stop being angry, obsessive, tries to prove a point too much, immature.
Special power: Fast, Sonic Fireboom
Marefriend/Stallionfriend: Lucky Game

Background

Human name: Mark Williams
Past: Growing up as a child, he wanted all of the top of the range gadgets. But his mother could never afford them, being as his dad was never around and she was on a very poor income. However, they got by and they held their heads tall, until someone decided to bully him for being poor. at first he didn't mind, the cursing would eventually cease, but then it grew. More people started to partake in insulting him, he coped for a while before he snapped. He ran home, and robbed his mums purse, ran to the closest store and bought a top of the range phone, just to take it to school, and have it broken the very same day.
When he returned home, his mother was waiting for him, with a scowl on her face, and tears streaming down her cheeks, he tried to hug her, but she shoved him away and started screaming about not being able to afford the house, so she had to put him up for adoption, hoping she could get him back, but he didn't know at the time, and thought she just hated him, he turned that hate on himself, inflicting himself with cuts.
Aspirations: As a Human, he wanted to join the Army, and fall in love eventually with someone special/As a Pony, he wants to become the head of the Wonderbolts, and join the Royal guards, earning the respect of thousands. He also wants to find his special somepony, and raise a family with her.
Darkest secret: Not telling you. :trollestia:
Dream job: Athletic Trainer (Top of the Wonderbolts)

Appearance

Sex: Male
Cutie mark: Double white thunderbolt
Colour eyes: White/grey
Coat colour: White
Mane colour: Red and orange
Hair style: Flames
Type (Pegasus, Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus

Extra: Isn't afraid to vent out his emotions to people he could hardly even know, easily gives out his trust which can be his downfall. He tries his hardest to get the things he has, and starts fro the very bottom, working his way up. He loves to push himself above and beyond his capabilities, to better himself at everything, and prove his worth to everyone/pony.

:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Name: Moon star

Hobbies/Interests: Being on stage and acting, hanging out with friends, joking around, flying, reading.

Strengths: Protecting his loved ones, speed, acting, magic.

Weaknesses: seeing his loved ones hurt, cupcakes, shy around mares, being tickled, losing someone close to him.

Special power: mimicking anypony or anything perfectly.

Marefriend/Stallionfriend: Her name is Nightstar (not my oc)

Background: Parents died when he was small and he lived in the everfree forset ever since. Used special talent to steal food to stay alive. When angry he turns into a darker version of himself (like nightmare moon)

Human name: Blake Boyd

Past: Lived with parents. father got thrown i jail, mom moved away. lives alone, in high school with part time job.

Aspirations: Human: being a great actor and father. Pony: be a great actor and magican and father.

Darkest secret: reason why father was thrown in jail.

Dream job: actor

Appearance

Sex: Male
Cutie mark: Drama club happy and sad faces
Colour eyes: blue
Coat colour: white
Mane colour: black with blue stripes.
Hair style: like rainbow dash's
Type (Pegasus, Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn

Extra: gets protective when threanthed, can control his darker side, never hurt somepony unless for self defense.


is this better :unsuresweetie:

Is this still where you want these things, or is there somewhere else?

Name: Chocolate Factory
Hobbies/Interests: Tinkering, day-dreaming, reading, napping
Strengths: Intuitive, clever, fun-to-be-around, self-confident, helpful (when aware of his surroundings)
Weaknesses: Not very athletic, impulsive, tends to be out of it, frank, very naive, hard-headed, has a hard time getting over ideas, seeing people hurt (never really had to deal with it), pretty lazy unless it's about something he's passionate about, could spend all of his time on one project without much trouble
Special power: Mechanical things, understanding and building machines
Marefriend/Stallionfriend: Blizzard (My other OC, I'll give you a thing for her in a minute)

Background

Human name: Thomas Allen
Past: He had a descent life. He was fairly sheltered as a child. His father ran a garage, so he got a lot of time to work with machinery. He built his own car from scrap parts found lying around the shop. He never really had many friends, but met Annie (Blizzard), fell in love (not instantly), and began to gain more of a life.
Aspirations: Not much, he's a very go-with-the-flow kinda guy.
Darkest secret: :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright: May or may not have blown something up... :trixieshiftright: :trixieshiftleft:
Dream job: Mechanic/Inventor, maybe opening a Chocolate Factory

Appearance

Sex: Male
Cutie mark: Three meshing gears.
Colour eyes: Brown
Coat colour: Chocolate brown
Mane colour: Chocolate brown and dark red
Hair style: Slicked back
Type (Pegasus, Unicorn, Earth): Unicorn

Extra: He has a black fedora, with a white stripe around it, that he always wears (FEDORAS FTW!) He is kinda nuts, always doing random stuff and sometimes getting in trouble for it.

I apologize for the shameless self advertising. *HINT HINT*

Picture!

Name: Blizzard
Hobbies/Interests: Weather/thermodynamics, keeping Chocolate on track, writing
Strengths: Athletic, has lots of common sense, natural leader (but doesn't like to lead), very down to earth, realist, level-headed, observant
Weaknesses: Little bit cynical, kinda pessimistic, can be cold towards people, focused on self preservation, distrustful of strangers, sensitized to violence, explodes violently (when she gets really mad/upset), has difficulty showing emotion, would probably react violently to anyone threatening her or her loved ones, not very good with children
Special power: Controlling ice, snow, and cold
Marefriend/Stallionfriend: Chocolate Factory (See above)

Background

Human name: Annie Johnson
Past: Her parents dies when she was young, sending her into a orphanage. She was recruited by a pseudo gang, a bunch of low life thugs, when she had nowhere else to turn. She witnessed a lot of bad things with that group. Said bad things made her realize that she didn't like all the violence, so she left. She went back to the orphanage and was sent to school. There she met Thomas (Chocolate), who made her want to be a better person. Long story short, they bring out the best in each other. They found ponies together, and it helps her control her emotion.
Aspirations: She wants to be a better person.
Darkest secret: I really can't tell you. She might hurt me.
Dream job: Not sure at the moment.

Appearance

Sex: Female
Cutie mark: A gray cloud over a snowflake.
Colour eyes: Yellow
Coat colour: A grayish blue
Mane colour: Icy blue with gray stripes
Hair style: It looks frozen (might actually be, she wont tell) sticking out forward
Type (Pegasus, Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus

Extra: She is incredibly sarcastic. She wears three bracelets around all four legs, and two more on her front left hoof.

These two basically embody the two different sides of my psyche.

Picture!

131537 Shit I am sorry dude I didn't read comments to know you wanted it here... will you still consider using it?

Wow, that's alot of requirements :applejackconfused:. time to start typin'.

name: Quick Blade
hobbies/intrests: enjoys listening to the sounds of the natural world, likes to annoy people when he knows them well (if their not upset to start off), reading,
strengths: agile, brilliant, conjuring blades (specifacly daggers), looking at multiple sides of a story, keeping an open mind (which leads to some of his weaknesses)
weaknesses: unconfident in himself, bottles his emotions (occasionally resulting in him being extremly dangerous when it spills out), when reflecting on his anger he often beats himself up, prefers to do things himself so he knows its his fault (again, resulting in weaknesses), memory, scared to ruin something when helping, has past keep surfacing, frightened when feet are off the ground, unable to stand crowds unless he knows the ponies, shy when meeting someone.
(ugh, my brain hurts from all the info!)
special powers: creating deadly, agile, spectracal daggers
mare/stallionfriend: (more like dream) Luna

background

human name: Dylan Lythus
past: parents often fought when they were together which lasted til he was 9 years old (nearly 10) and shortly before the divorce, his father lost his anger and threw a large bowl to his mother while he was in between. gravity having done it's glorious work, the bowl landed on Dylan's head, causing a nasty cut. shortly after the bowl incident, he lost contact with his father for a week. his father, having been thought dead by the boy, returned and introduced the boy to a friend. Dylan and his father stayed at the friend's house a couple of days, and returned home. because of a few words the boy said, he then felt guilty of the divorce. At the age of 13, discovering ponies about 6 months ago (which turned his life away from suicide), he dies in an unfortunate accident caused by two teens at the wheel.
aspirations: look at the positive side of everything like his mother
darkest secret: feels useless because of things he has experienced (Not even close to saying why)
dream job: palentology

(almost done!)
apearance

sex: male
cutiemark: golden, transparent dagger
color eyes: hazel green eyes
coat color: light red
mane color: red-vilot
hairstyle: bedhead (hardly brushes)
type: unicorn
extra: sarcastic,

Wow. after... I dont know how many hours, I'm done. YES! :yay:

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