Fear of Change · 4:19am May 21st, 2013
Well, despite an entire day of arguing with myself about this, I did update my story, An Old World for Fluttershy. I am a firm believer of "don't fix it if it isn't broken," but even more so of "nothing is perfect, everything can be improved." I tried to take the extremely valuable criticism to heart during this update, so I hope it's even better than before! I mainly fixed the broken syntax, added in some more description, and tweaked the ending. I really hope everyone enjoys the changes (instead of yelling at me for them). BUT I was sure to totally cover my tracks. Just in case I overdid it and turned my story to garbage, I have my original saved on my computer. So, worse comes to worse, I get told it's garbage and I replace it. Sound fair? Check it out if you have the time... I mean... if you want to.
I'll give it another read once school is over