Small Re-Write. · 4:20am May 19th, 2013
TL;DR To anyone wondering I fixed up Chapter 5 of The Lost World.
Okay, I took the time out to sit back and actually read everything I had written of my story so far. When I reached chapter 5 I very quickly came to the determination that the chapter really needed to be re-written around the mid point. It was chunky and very flow breaking the way I used the flashbacks, so I fixed it I hope.
I don't know if it makes it better but I can hope right?