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  • 506 weeks
    What type of story is Dogs, anyway?

    I marked it as an Adventure, but that doesn't quite feel right. Sure, the Diamond Dogs are on an adventure into strange and foreign lands from their point of view, but does that count if they're treading ground with which the readers are already familiar? Since we're seeing the world through their eyes, I want this to feel like an adventure, but I'm not sure I've succeeded so far.

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  • 554 weeks
    Mare Doloris Ch. 18 edited

    One of my readers was helpful enough to point out that the narrator forgets about the audio evidence he gathered in the previous chapter.* After reviewing, I find I agree that he shouldn't have done that. I made some edits and added some dialogue to the latest chapter (18: "Convalescence") in an attempt to fix this

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  • 557 weeks
    Excerpt from a fic I was working on pre-fimfiction

    Sorry for the long lack of updates to both stories. By way of apology, and to try and get myself motivated again, I present an excerpt from an old, old fic I started working on way back between seasons 2 and 3. If you remember some of my old blog posts, this is from the HiE that got to around 90 pages before I decided it needed a rewrite. In this scene, the story's major villains, recently

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  • 563 weeks
    Unofficial Mare Doloris Theme Song

    If it was in a a different medium, each episode would close to this ditty by Bombadil. I could see parts of it applying to both principal characters in different ways.

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  • 570 weeks
    Readers: Does Spirits Need a Dark Tag?

    After I published chapter eleven of The Spirits of Harmony, reader Majk commented to say:

    I'm really having a blast reading this story but methinks it deserves a dark tag. All that mindbucking done by spirits is kinda grim and gets more scary the more you think about it (but that could be just me).

    as to what was most disturbing:

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May
11th
2013

So I finally got around to reading the comics & thoughts on astronomy · 6:18pm May 11th, 2013

I'd been putting it off mainly because it looked like Mare Doloris would get jossed pretty savagely.

But now I have!

And it is pretty jossed. My uninhabited, inhospitable moonscape does not appear to have much in common with the way the ponies' moon is depicted in the comic.

For that matter, does their moon even have phases visible from the planet? I know they have pictures of crescent moons in art and cutie marks, but, as far as I can recall, whenever the moon is seen in the night sky it seems as if the whole disk is illuminated.* I guess this makes sense; if moonrise begins the night as sunrise begins the day, then wouldn't observers on the planet always see the face of the moon pointed directly at the sun? Actually, if it wasn't offset a bit, there'd be a permanent lunar eclipse (I suspect Luna would hate that.) But for this to happen, the planet can't be orbiting the sun with the moon orbiting the planet. The satellite would have to change position relative to the sun for planetary observers or it wouldn't be a moon at all, rather a dwarf planet in an orbit just a tiny bit wider than pony-earth's (but not gravitationally affecting each other) with a year of the exact same length, right?

Gah.

I can certainly see why some authors depict the pony system as a sort of geocentric orrery thingamajig, with a small "satellite sun" orbiting the planet opposite the moon.

Still, I will keep writing MD, and I will not attempt to bring it into continuity with the comics, astronomically or otherwise. Apologies for the >1 month wait between chapters.

*EDIT: Yes, actually, different phases of the moon are visible in the show. That the moon is never visible in the daytime is still crazy and hard to reconcile with even the caramel-hardness sciffy setting of MD, though.

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