For Those Who Have Suggestions on "The Hypnotic Adventures of Blank Sheet."

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[NovemberWolf]

Alrighty then!
I wrote this stuff up when talking to greentext in a PM about possible future scenarios, but I'll copy them here for public records.

I always loved the idea of making Rarity do unladylike things. When Blank Sheet gets to her (while she's in her store working on dresses, preferably), it might be fun to have him zap her like normal, but just make her think that everything he does is perfectly normal behavior, no matter what. Then, he wakes her up and starts talking to her. He tests it by saying things that by all logic should offend her cultured tastes, yet she isn't bothered at all. Then, he takes it one step further by touching her, looking at her closely, doing anything to violate her personal space, yet she just keeps with the conversation like normal. Obviously the logical endpoint of this would be to mount her and just start going to town, all the while she doesn't notice anything at all abnormal with the situation, to the point that when its all done she tells him to goodbye and have a nice day. Perfectly average customer.

Rainbow Dash is a little more straightforward. Blank Sheet just tells her that sex is the greatest sport of all time, and that if she wants to get into the Wonderbolts, she'll have to train up. Now, all her determination and competitive energy is being redirected towards rutting him.

I've always been very disappointed that so few clopfics (decent ones, anyway) have utilized the Holy Grail of canonical sex spells, Twilight Sparkle's "Want It Need It". It'd be nice to see Blank Sheet get Twilight to cast it on him, perhaps a specific part of him. Also, as far as the story is concerned, Twilight could be pretty useful for getting extra spells/powers for him, maybe a spell crystal designed by Twilight and infused with her power so that Blank Sheet can cast a single medium-power spell every so often. It recharges every twelve hours or something, whatever serves to give him a little something extra for if things ever heat up.

This one might come out of the blue, but I've got a nice little idea for an Octavia encounter. Blank Sheet zaps her, and makes it so that whenever she plays a note of music, she gets just a little bit hornier. Then, he wakes her up and makes her play him a song with her cello/bass/whatever. She has to get to the end of the song before she can do anything about her rising heat, so by the time the last note of the song is played she's lost all moral inhibitions, and pounces. To appease Discord, he could keep her in that musical-fetishistic state, too.

Okay, one more for now. This would probably be for later in the fic. Luna can enter ponies' dreams and communicate with them inside, which means that at least part of her mind is there to do so. Perhaps Luna is searching for the culprit of all this mind control business, when she enters Blank Sheet's dream while he's sleeping. When she approaches him, he takes a chance and puts her under, and from there he's got control of her just like everybody else. Maybe he has her take him into other ponies' dreams and he starts messing with them, maybe he just has Luna craft him a dream harem for the night, whatever seems most interesting. This might be a good route for him to take on the road to taking Celestia as well, since he could probably control her a lot easier if she was asleep at the time. Of course, Luna and Celestia both certainly have mind control protection far stronger than Spiral, so this would be really difficult for him to do.

There we go, just some random ideas I've always wanted to see someone do.
Have fun with your story!

[lordgriffin]

I would really like to discuss a few ideas with you over e-mail

[e-mail]

Suffice it to say just ONCE I'd like to see someone be able to go thru the 6 AND Celestia and Luna and actually win for a change