Blagoblag · 11:45pm May 1st, 2013
If you didn't already know, I have updated 'The Replacement' with a second chapter, so you can go and check that out.
I think that it is an improvement on the writing style from the first chapter, at least pacing wise. The first chapter probably could have been significantly longer. While I do in fact have a plan for the entire storyline and how it turns out, I'm also thinking about having some serious moments in the series that will really change the way in which you think about its narrator and his motivations. This doesn't mean I plan on going full Cerebus Syndrome on you, but I hope to incorporate more than just a new string of gags into the fic. I'd like to hear your thoughts on this matter, because the way I work, my plan is extremely flexible, and most of the writing is done stream-of-consciousness in order to preserve the talking-at-you feel of the story.
Thanks,
VeryConfused
Do what you want, so long as it flows good!
Also, wall of text is bad mk?
1047783 I'll format better next time.