A short not-hiatus · 2:48pm Apr 26th, 2013
Hey guys, just a heads up, this next chapter may take abnormally long to post. I am just really struggling with some concepts for this story, and how they all fit together. I know precisely where I need to go next, and what I need to do now, but I don't know how to go from here to there, and it's all very hard to explain. Anyways, what y'all can do to help me, if you want to see this chapter come a little faster, is *criticize*. Users Rainbow Ninja and Brutydude were helpful in pointing out my OP representation of Celestia. While I did defend their powers as a story element, their criticism helped bring it into focus, and as a result I am trying to clarify a few things in the coming chapters that are part of my conceptualization for this story, but which may not be entirely apparent from the way things are written. Basically I want to make sure that the concepts I have outlined in my head as base rules for this crossover are portrayed in the story in a believable and easily understood way, so that everything is internally consistent. Your feedback helps immensely with this, most especially with questions. You may not get an answer, atleast not in the comments, and maybe even not right away in the story, but the fact that you need to ask the question will inform me what needs to be illustrated, and where I need to take some things in the writing to help flesh things out. All will be answered in time, I just want to make sure my answers are clear, and make sense to people other than me.
So. tl;dr - Criticize. Tear this story to shreds. Tell me anything and everything that you don't like and why. Ask questions for anything that you are confused about. I may jump in and defend something or answer a question, or if you point out a mistake, I may simply blush, shout at myself for being stupid and try and work with it.
Still tl;dr - Feedback and criticism, motherfuckers, DO YOU SPEAK IT?
Ah man, this is the most beautiful way to ask for criticism I've ever seen. If that doesn't turn on your eye for literary breakdown I don't know what will.