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Erol carstein


Just a guy with time on his hands really, all I can say is a hope you enjoy what I write

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  • 310 weeks
    Going forward

    After a long hiatus involving drink, drugs, parental divorce, cancer, lots of debt, and an over riding urge to commit suicide, I'm back

    Expect chapter 4 of the heavenfall by the end of next week, to those of you who followed my shining armour stories expect a continuation by the end of the month.

    Thank you for your patience

    Erol

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  • 436 weeks
    hey there guys.

    So it's been a while. ridiculously too long in fact. where have I been? I don't want to say, and what have I done? I don't want to say. I've let most of you down by neglecting to return and finish what I've started, and while I can't promise swift or regular updates, I will try what I can

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  • 496 weeks
    Guess who's back; back again.

    Erol's back. Tell a friend.

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  • 512 weeks
    GOOD NEWS EVERYONE!

    My laptop finally gets out the maintainence bay today, so expect the next chapter of Heavenfall soon!

    5 comments · 611 views
  • 520 weeks
    A serious question about the escapades of Shining Armour.

    Hey guys.

    Thanks for all your support and encouragement for my Shining Armour series. Just wanting you to know that the next installment is on the way, with Shining Armour heading up north on a diplomatic mission to the Crystal Empire.

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    4 comments · 577 views
Apr
17th
2013

EQD · 6:01pm Apr 17th, 2013

Sorry guys, but Terminal World is being put on Hiatus whilst I prep it for EQD.

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Comments ( 1 )

Yikes man, this post has only 4 views so far! Almost none of your readers are gonna see this message here.

I really hope you've got people helping you, because Terminal World needs line-by-line reading to correct all the small grammar errors in it. (Not that those errors bother 99% of readers, but the EqD prereaders are picky about everything.) I wish you the best of luck, because even if you get the story technically perfect quite frankly it's not the usual type of stuff that gets up there. Remember that any pre-reader will reject it if they arbitrarily don't like it. EqD ain't fair.

I haven't read the novel by Alastair Reynolds, so I don't know how much this story differs from the original, but if it's not obviously changed beyond replacing the humans with ponies, then it's not gonna fly. If you can find an EqD 'expert' then you really should get their help.

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