Weekend Editing Extravaganza! · 2:57pm Mar 15th, 2012
This weekend, as in Saturday 17th to Sunday the 18th, I will be editing the ever-loving shit out of Yellowstone and Yellowstone the series. Such will be the editing, that that I may have to re-upload a chapter or two to Fimfiction.
"But Anonsi," you might say, "why act on this sudden urge to do something constructive, as opposed to writing a new installment of YtS or Opening Week?"
"Because!" I would reply, "My work is long overdue for a kick to the pants, and dammit someone has to do it!"
There's also the fact that it is rife with tiny errors and there are a few parts that could be better written (insert graceful bow to Hidden Brony for his comments here).
Speaking of comments, here's the rest of the deal with this: Here, in this very blog post, you can tell me what you did not like about Yellowstone or Yellowstone the Series. So long as your criticism is helpful, it may very well affect the editing process. This will essentially be an open critique made by anyone who cares (all 3 of you).
What I hope to fix in this editing thing so far is:
Yellowstone:
Why didn't Hawk use a different weapon from his bag when first confronting Cottonmouth
Grammar and spelling errors (There are just so many!)
YtS:
Adding in at least one character building scene earlier on so that a later scene will be better
Make sure every pony is in character
Fix grammar and spelling errors (Yes, it is worth mentioning twice)
So that's what I got so far. Feel free to give your two cents. Seriously. Give them. I NEED THEM.
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I suppose someone had to make that joke.
I can only spare this ha'penny, sorry.
Have Cerberus (Not our version but equestrians) appear in greek and begins to make a mess of the place (only doing property damage at first, with hawk sorta freak out at the mention of Tartarus
Twilight: Nononono! not your world version, its more like a prison in our world, containing all the ancient evils in Equestrian history.
Zorro: Ahh sorta like Pandora Box.
Now as for the evil ponies terrorist have them hold a town hostage and threaten to kill all these worthless apes (Stating that since they havn't went to the center that they would rather stay in this place) unless there demands are met, so they send in a negotiator.
hopes these are to your liking
The original Yellowstone has now been edited. Tomorrow begins the editing of YtS.
Dear God.
Why am I doing this?