I could use some help.

It has come to my attention that many of my readers are losing interest in my story, and I want to apologize for it. I'm sorry that I lack good grammar skills, flow of time, and conflict. I will do my best to rectify what I have already ruined, and if any of you care to lend me some of your much valued wisdom I would gladly accept it.

Please forgive my incompetence as we try to correct this mistake.