Istanbul, not Constantinople

Heh, yeah, so, about that story.

So I put up a story about... four days ago that I wasn't completely happy with. In the next 24 hours I had a few rave reviews, which obviously made me cheerful, some helpful critique, and a proper swearing-at in my inbox by somepony who knew what they were talking about but, it seemed, hadn't had their Weetabix. Fair enough. I'm... doing some refits. Those of you who've read it should note that the critique was doubleplus helpful, and that it might be undergoing some changes in a week or so.

But for now, I'm being a tourist in Istanbul for a few days.

Enjoy the video.