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Nevdar


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  • 509 weeks
    Here we go again.

    Okay everyone. I just posted my story again but I want you all to know that it is currently still a work in progress. So a lot of it may change at some point in the future.

    Also. New Cover Art! This masterful work of art was made by the amazing Onyrica. Check her out on DA here http://onyrica.deviantart.com/

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  • 582 weeks
    First Blog Post and First Story.

    Hello everyone. This is my first blog post on FIMfiction, and I just wanted to let you all know that I am currently working on my first FiM FanFic. I hope that it turns out well and who ever happens to read it, please leave me some feedback. I will take it all into consideration.

    Thank you everypony. Can't wait to hear from you.

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First Blog Post and First Story. · 8:31pm Mar 5th, 2013

Hello everyone. This is my first blog post on FIMfiction, and I just wanted to let you all know that I am currently working on my first FiM FanFic. I hope that it turns out well and who ever happens to read it, please leave me some feedback. I will take it all into consideration.

Thank you everypony. Can't wait to hear from you.

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Comments ( 13 )

How's the story going?

2327432
Not good so far. I decided to scrap it for now. I couldn't get it to flow right and have been too busy with work and family to work on it again. I've been thinking about it for awhile and no matter which way I spin it, it always sounds funky.

Maybe I'm just thinking about it too hard. But I don't have anyone to help me out. Friends and family don't understand why I like the show or why I'm writing a fanfic so it's all trying to come from my brain and I don't have someone to bounce ideas off of.

2328049 I can help you out.

2328102
That is very much appreciated, thank you! I'm not sure what I could do right now as I'm on my phone and at work...shhhh... How would you like to help me out?

2328110 Meh, any way you want. I can help you with your story, talk to you, whatever.

2328113
Well, tell you what. I have my story saved on fimfic but never submitted it. How about I submit it and when it comes up you can read it and tell me what needs changed, any ideas you have, stuff like that. Then when I get some free time I'll go in and change it up.

2328123 Sure! What's the story about, anyway?

2328126
Basically its about a mare who has lived with zacora since she was a foal. And sees the ever free forest as her home. Now she wants to go on a new adventure where she meets other ponies.

I've had this story in my head for awhile and after writing it there are a few things that I'm pretty sure I want to change and I don't think that I got around to changing them. But the reason I put them in in the first place was to make it a different kind of story. One that I hadn't seen done before. I also felt like challenging myself but then life got in the way and now I just realized that it has been over a year. What the hell.

2328144 Did you submit it yet or are you looking it over one last time?

2328148
I submitted it now it is just waiting approval. Just know that when it does come up I actually have a different cover art for it. I had someone make me one. I just forgot about it.

2328152 Cool! pm me when it's approved; it might get lost in the feed because I'm following so many people. I might see it on the front page, but ya know, just in case.

2328153
Yeah I will. Thanks again. Any idea how long it takes for a story to get approved? I can't remember.

2328159 Depends on how many story approvers are online and who you get to approve it. One of my stories I submitted at 3:52 am and got approved at 4:00 am, another one took an hour and a half.

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