it will be a similar type of story but i'm going to be fleshing out the characters and worlds more. making it flow much more smoothly and make more sense overall.
sorry for everyone that was keeping track of it. hopefull you will like this new one better!
My proofreading is ineffective if I can still find mistakes I've already fixed.
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=O I had both copies up side by side and went through them line by line D:
please tell me what's left over.
A lot. You might want to do that again. Commas are missing from where I placed them, and I still see he and she capitalized when it shouldn't be.
How do you compare them?
29698 I copied your version over into word, then read a sentence from both, and corrected any changes one sentence at a time.
29699 Well, compare them once more. Because my periods and commas shouldn't look the same in Word.