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Aethris


Hello everyone, (ponies, bronies, normal humans, and any other sentient beings included.) Welcome to my profile.

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  • 633 weeks
    Rewriting.

    Rewriting Kiral and renaming it as well.

    it will be a similar type of story but i'm going to be fleshing out the characters and worlds more. making it flow much more smoothly and make more sense overall.

    sorry for everyone that was keeping track of it. hopefull you will like this new one better!

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  • 636 weeks
    Chapter 1 done.

    Chapter 1 is done and uploaded, still working on the cover picture =x

    1 comments · 201 views
  • 637 weeks
    Working on Chapter 1 of Kiral

    Prologue has been proofread and fixed. enjoy.

    Working on chapter 1 now.

    5 comments · 247 views
  • 637 weeks
    Working on updating the picture for Kiral.

    Just making her art cleaner, hopefully add some color.

    Also working on chapter 1 which is going to be the start of Twilight's multiverse travels.

    Again, if you see any errors in my fics or art please tell me so I can fix them,

    Thanks,

    Aethris

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Mar
11th
2012

Working on Chapter 1 of Kiral · 6:45am Mar 11th, 2012

Prologue has been proofread and fixed. enjoy.

Working on chapter 1 now.

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Comments ( 5 )

My proofreading is ineffective if I can still find mistakes I've already fixed.

29693

=O I had both copies up side by side and went through them line by line D:

please tell me what's left over.

A lot. You might want to do that again. Commas are missing from where I placed them, and I still see he and she capitalized when it shouldn't be.

How do you compare them?

29698 I copied your version over into word, then read a sentence from both, and corrected any changes one sentence at a time.

29699 Well, compare them once more. Because my periods and commas shouldn't look the same in Word.

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