Nov
11th
2011
Editing, Go! · 2:57am Nov 11th, 2011
One of the most common comments I've gotten so far is that the chapters feel too short. I had intended that to feel as if there was a sense of urgency - she's trying to do this all in one night, after all. However, I do understand when people say that it felt rushed. As a result, I'll be going back and editing each chapter before moving onto the next one, which will be Fluttershy's.
Be advised that anything you have already read may end up changing. Thanks for reading!
-Vargras
