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Toothless the Night Fury


Fire-breathing dragon with a passion for reading, writing, and editing. Avatar by CosmicSpectrumm

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  • 337 weeks
    On Hiatus!

    Hiya folks!

    Sorry, but I will be going on hiatus for a while. I plan maybe two or three weeks. I will sadly not be updating My Name Is Tempest during that time. I will try to write chapters and push them out here or there, but they will not be on my regular weekly schedule.

    See ya guys then!

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  • 339 weeks
    Discord-themed FIMFiction

    I was messing with Inrixia's Dark Theme and tried a style of my own. I absolutely love Discord. It's one of my favorite programs of all time. Discord's dark theme is no exception to this. So I've been playing around with a Discord-themed FIMFiction.

    What do you guys think?

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    1 comments · 300 views
  • 340 weeks
    Pre-Reading: "Tempest Shadow: Operation Firework"

    Hiya everyone!

    I'm very proud to announce the release of one of the stories I've pre-read for, Tempest Shadow: Operation Firework. Warning: minor spoilers of the My Little Pony movie included.

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    1 comments · 354 views
  • 342 weeks
    So I updated my blog so that old one isn't here anymore...

    Hiya everyone!

    This account is super duper old and likely most of the people following me isn't here anymore, so I just wanted to update this in-case any new people stumble across this.

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    0 comments · 278 views
  • 576 weeks
    An Unexpected Return

    As many of you have known, I have been gone for much of this week. No, I wasn't partying or was so lazy that I didn't want to check in here. I love the site, and many of the people in it! I actually came into the ER on April 6th with acute abdominal pain, which later turned out to be appendicitis.

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Feb
10th
2013

Overly-Extensive Editors: Tags and Editing · 11:13pm Feb 10th, 2013

An organized list of the tags I use for Google Docs whenever I edit for Overly-Extensive Editors. I'll usually link this blog page to the member when I begin editing the story.

[GRAMMAR]: Spelling, punctuation, misused words, etc.
[REPHRASE]: Rewritten sentence to fix strange sentence formats, combining sentences, making more complex structures, repetition, etc.
[CLARIFY]: Used whenever I feel confused or lost when I read the sentence.
[FORMAT]: Dividers, tabs, etc.
[CREATIVE]: Rewritten sentence to add more detail, mystery, excitement, etc.
[PROBLEM: X]: A key aspect or idea that is repeatedly done incorrectly; often includes a link. Example: [PROBLEM: CREATIVE]
[CANON]: Actions or ideas that break either the canon of the story, or the laws of physics. Does not apply to Pinkie Pie.
[PLOT]: Plot holes, conflict, themes, cliches, etc.
[CHARACTER]: Character arcs, flat characters, antagonists, protagonists, etc.
[WORD]: Changed word or words, either by a thesaurus or my own discretion. These are often noted with brackets "[ ]".
[OPTIONAL]: More personal opinion than actual error. Usually applied to more subjective changes.
[FINAL NOTES]: A summary of all my comments made.
[MARK]: Note to myself to add reasons/examples for highlighting.

Comments ( 1 )

Actions or ideas that break either the canon of the story, or the laws of physics. Does not apply to Pinkie Pie.

She broke the 4th dimension!:pinkiecrazy:

Sorry, I couldn't resist! :rainbowlaugh:

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