Equestria Daily and 'Worlds Beyond'

I submitted 'Worlds Beyond' to Equestria Daily, and the prereaders came back with a few suggestions, which I've implemented. Specifically, I removed the 'opening credits', gave Applejack a lesson in the Princess's English (though some of her characteristic drawl remains), and added a brief section to the 'examining the capsule' scene where they discuss the question of who sent the thing. I also offered to let their prereaders have a crack at part II before it goes live on the site. Hopefully with these changes I can get up on Equestria Daily, with the concomitant surge of readers!