Rainbows In Moonlight sequel soon. · 1:49am Jan 29th, 2013
Hey guys. So, I know I haven't been very active lately, which is because of a couple personal things, but I'm getting back on it, this time with a sequel to Rainbows In Moonlight, my first story. It will be bigger, badder, and well...less crappy...so, for now, here's a preview of the prequel to my upcoming story, Rainbows In Darkness.
The forest was dark in the middle of the night. A single dark-blue unicorn quickly walked through, searching. He knew he had to find them. It was the only way to end his nightmare.
His horn dimly illuminated the path before him, allowing him to see what he had been looking for, stuck to a tree. He scurried up to the tree and pulled the worn scrap of paper off. He had them all now. He could finally escape.
His victory was short lived, however, as he turned around to see a shadowy figure in the distance, slowly moving closer to him. At this point, the unicorn was loudly sprinting away from the creature, not daring to look behind him. Soon, he tripped on a twig and went tumbling to the ground.
He looked for the figure that was chasing him, but it seemed to have disappeared. Was he safe now? He slowly got up and looked around. He was alone. He turned around and headed toward the exit. He was almost there. It was just in sight.
Finally, he made it to the path leading out of the forest. He stared at the stack of pages that he was carrying. He knew that these pages would stop the creature, and end it all. Suddenly, he heard a strange noise from behind him. Was it footsteps?
He slowly turned around to look for the source of the noise. Nothing was there. He turned back around to find the creature staring him in the face. The unicorn screamed and threw the eight pages in the air, scattering them in different directions, and ran out of the forest, not bothering to look behind him.
Now that wasn't so bad, was it? Anyways, tell me what you think in the comments.
-Scratch
Ya still want me for an editor ?
763537 Yes, I will message you shortly.
763540 Alright but I wont be able to edit today. I have school in the morning , but I'll do it tomorrow