In need of a proofreader... Any takers?

I'm finally almost done with chapter two of my first story and could use some help. Thats it...
Wait! No it isn't! I also have a bunch of new stories almost done.

P.S. their is about a 1 in 100... No mabey 1000 chance that I get banned. It's unlikley to happen. I think Knighty is cool, and I think the message I just wrote him was honest enough in my belief about RTE trolling his followers that he won't. But if i was wrong, then i am gone.

I don't think i was wrong...

Plus the chances are much higher of said message getting lost in cyberspace aka his over flooded inbox. Then him actually caring about what I have to say in regard to something utterly pointless... Let alone acting on it.

You know what make that 1 in 10,000.

Most of you will not know what i am talking about in this post script, don't worry, I'm just tierd and bored and half talking to myself.

Relax, nothing is real, their is only empty space and you, and you are but a thought. Ten points if you get that referace. Twenty if its without googleing it.

Oh well only twenty ponies read this... Of them only like four ever respond...

P.S.S. Love you commenters

Comments

[Bennet001]

I offer myself as tribute!! I would love to help you.

[III Clyde The Third III]

Youd better not get banned. I need those stories!