My Grammar Issues and New Stories

As I'm finishing up my story I'm thinking about putting up an old story of mine I've written before, Darkness Over Equestria. A crossover story about, you guessed it, Kingdom Hearts 2. Also I'm currently writing a "sequel" to Escape to Paradise, it'll be called, Staying Neutral. I'm not going to spill anything about it if you're wondering.

Also I've received a message concerning about Escape to Paradise. They said the story had obvious grammar issues and would like to speak with me and help me make it a lot better than it is now. Yes I create idea's. No I cannot do grammar for nothing.