So, I think what I was doing wrong was that I was writing chapters too long. I need to tone it down to like, 300 words. Then I should be able to get this thing worked on. So when I finish this, I will have a bit more experience in FIMfic and can take another stab at this. I'm going to try to do this crap and do it right.
Ugh, this is a nasty flu. I got sicker than from my last blog post. I'm sick still, but I will try to write anyways. I'm thinking of adding bonus chapters, such as appendix chapters, side-stories, the sorts. So maybe that will come later!