Incoming Story

Hello Everypony

I'm writing on a new Story at the Moment (Archmage Twilight Sparkle the Wise), and I'm looking for a new pre-reader now.

What he must be able to do:
1. Find mistakes in my text which I haven't found

What would be good if he has it:
1. Knowledge how to write awsome and Interessting
2. Likes to rub every single group of mistakes under my nose, I still have to learn a lot:D

yeah, so it could be about merely everypony out there.

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