Sorry Again

Sorry bros. I know you want me to continue the Judgement Day story but due to the dislikes it received I'm gonna have to delete again. I'm sorry I know you wanna see more of this but I think I ruined another chance. So sorry for the bad news.

Comments

[Artist]

Truth is, most people on this site couldn't care less whether you delete stories or not. It's just not a big deal to them. And let's face it, when your stories go up, they don't exactly flood in with comments. It seems like a lot of folks aren't really invested in what you upload. I've been in the same boat, but honestly, I'm starting to care less about getting comments or not.

If you're looking for constructive criticism, here's a tip: when writing a story, focus on crafting a compelling narrative rather than involving the readers directly. Avoid phrases like "we are doing something" or "we are in the story." Readers prefer to observe the characters' actions rather than feeling like they're part of the story themselves. It might be why you're receiving negative feedback. Describe the characters' actions instead of narrating them as if the readers are witnessing it firsthand. This approach will make your storytelling more engaging and immersive. Let me know if you need further clarification or assistance with your writing!

Best regards, Artist.