Judgement Day Story Retry · 6:00pm March 20th
Hey bros. Remember when I wanted to make a story that featured The Judgement Day from WWE but I had to delete it? Well I thought maybe I try again. And this time they are planning on ruining the big wedding or Cadence and Shining Armor. Comment down what you want the Judgement Day to do and how I can remain the villainous group they are.
Maybe they could help King Sombra and he could give them dark magic.
5773364
Yeah! And of course Dirty Dom would talk trash about the couple and disrespect them.
Honestly, I don’t know how to feel about this idea.
How in the world you have so many stories in so little time is just beyond me, to me, it seems as though you don’t even take the time to actually write a proper story.
Trust me, I’ve read some of your stories they seem awfully rushed, and it seems as though you don’t put enough time and effort into them.
I mean, I get dislikes on my stories for a reason, but it seems as though for you, there is also a reason behind why people don’t like your stories, but they just don’t say anything about it, you seem to get a lot of hate for no apparent reason.
5773481
Your right. Maybe this Judgement Day retry wasn't a good idea after all. And I think you're right. I was so excited to try new ideas that I probably didn't slow down. Maybe I should quit writing them if they keep giving me the hate.
5773482
I’m not talking about this judgment day story of yours, I mean, even your stories that are already published, they are not initially bad, but the pacing could be a little better. Now I’m speaking from experience here my pacing in my stories is also no good, but that’s why I have editors to help me or ask for editors, who may be able to help me.
5773488
Oh. I understand. I'm sorry I misheard you. But you're right. Maybe I do need to stop rushing through and actually take my time.
5773490
Yet you published another story, but did you actually take your time on that one?, Also, you may want to use an editing software like Grammarly for your grammar mistakes.