Regarding the future of of the hoenn saga of my pokemon series.

during my vacation i had a lot of time to think and review what i wrote so far several times. I noticed i made two big mistakes with the story. the first is that i completely rushed into it not giving my readers time to catch up or make it exciting in any way. the second was i was just copying the anime instead of adapting it into my own style like i usually do as indicated by the new girl and turquoise's first two pokemon being the same as ash's. Don't panic i'm not giving up on this project infact i'm going to remove the current story and rework what i have so far so i can make it seem more original.