need an opinion

so i have this story that i've been wiritng before and i have one scene where im not entirely so sure about it. if you guys have an opinons about it, that would be great and would help a lot.

“What though?!” she asked confused. Before second thinking, I grabbed her face and kissed her. My heartbeat started to beat faster, and I could feel her heartbeat against my chest. I pulled her closer to me and ran a hand through her hair from behind her neck upwards. I felt her hands wrap around my neck and she caressed my lips. I opened my eyes slightly before closing them again and embracing into the kiss. Her lips were soft as she pressed her mouth against mine. I moved my hand and cupped her face, her skin silky and warm against my touch. Even though it was our first kiss, it felt like we’d kissed before. Right at that moment, William walked past and didn’t notice a thing. Once he closed the door, I pulled away from Annaliese and pressed my forehead against hers. She looked up at me, the desire to kiss me again noticeable.

“Adin…” I pressed a finger on her lips and stared her in the eyes.

“Shh…” I ran a finger along the outline of her petal lips, feeling them part slightly. I shifted my view towards her lips, so soft to the touch. I could feel my heartbeat increasing in speed, but Annaliese placed a hand on my heart and my heartbeat slowed down slightly. I turned her around and pushed her against the wall, staring down at her as my eyes darkened. Annaliese looked up at me, then my lips and back to my eyes, examining my face. I caressed her cheek before cupping her face and pressing my lips against hers gently. Our eyes closed slightly staring at each other before fully shutting our eyes. I wanted to open my eyes to examine her face… but they refused to open. I drew my lips around her lips before covering her lips with mine again. She ran a hand through my hair gently as she kissed me back. I grabbed her by the waist with one hand and continued to satisfy our desire. The kiss was heavenly, even better than the first one. The simple desire and longing were evident in the kiss, and I pushed all my pent-up feelings for her in the kiss. I moved my hand back behind her neck and grabbed her hair while I pressed her body closer to mine. I could feel the outline of her hips against my body and her heartbeat against my chest. It was soothing to hold her and kiss her, and in a way I never would have imagined. I couldn’t have asked for a better way either. I gave her one last, passionate kiss before picking her up and taking her into one of the rooms.

I placed her on the table and continued to kiss her passionately. I could feel our shared breath as we continued to share our lips. Annaliese pulled away and sighed deeply. I looked at her and held her face as we both stared at each other. The chemistry was undoubtedly there, we both knew… then why keep it a secret from each other? I leaned in to kiss her one more time, but she placed her hand against my chest.

“Next time Adin…” she said in a gentle voice. Next time.