A New Story-A Final Sunset?

Posting a new version of a story I had put forward a few years back. This story involved a catastrophic situation in the mirror room with Celestia and Sunset Shimmer the premise being a kind of what if Sunset Shimmer didn't go through the portal but the mirror went haywire and exploded causing damage to Sunset. It was originally meant to be a kind of one-shot piece but there was more interest than I had originally anticipated. It quickly became apparent as I tried to expand the story that my overall desire to give to others who wanted a longer story was met with an inability to do so aka I bit off more than I could chew for my writing skills at the time and so I removed it. I've submitted my new version of the story for approval and hope that it will be approved in the next week or two as I don't know the actual time frame for such a thing. If you do choose to read it bear in mind that this is essentially a first-time attempt after an earlier first-time attempt so it may be a bit rough...But hopefully far less rough than several years ago.

P.S. If anyone knows the length of time for approval let me know as I'd be curious to know as I have no idea how long of a time frame it may be until the story is either approved or rejected..Though I hope it'll be approved.