FiMfiction Author Reviews! #1 (RainbowFucktory) · 10:43am Sep 12th, 2023
Hello everybody! Welcome to the first edition of the FAR. Almost no-one views my blogs, but that won't stop me! Today we have two stories (which are probably set in the same universe) which are written by user RainbowFucktory!
Their stories are... certainly something... and they're also schizophrenic, so don't be too hard on them.
The user in this review should not be attacked or bullied
So yeah, dear RainbowFucktory, if you're reading this, no hard feelings? Anyways, without further ado, let's get this over with, shall we?
by RainbowFucktory
Description: Having recently forwarded to a highschool in Ponyville after she didn't feel content at her old one, Twilight has to keep a secret that she's Celestia's student, or else nopony will stop asking her about it. That is until she meets the popular girls and a cute boy, what will she do?
Ok... this was some story. This story revolves around the basic high-school setting like in Equestria Girl's, packed with everything "high-schooly", from friends, bullies, crushes. Let's start off with the crush, this story has Twilight crush on some random OC dude, and the OC dude is Rarity's brother?! On top of being Rarity's brother, he's a human?! when the hell did that happen?! The story is fine though, in the first few chapters, by the time we reach the later chapters, the story has drifted off into crackfic/trollfic territory, actually, the last chapter literally feels like it is a crackfic/trollfic. This story also touches on subjects like high-school shootings?! Also, the author has this obsession with the Elements of Insanity character Rainbine (who is apparently Dashie's sister in this) in place of actual Rainbow Dash.
Now, the final rating for this fic is -- drumroll please:
PRETTY BAD!
Due to good story in the first chapter, but the literal crackfic/trollfic feel of the later chapters, VERY "sensitive" (for lack of a better word) topics, shippening between an OC and a main character and also humans existing out of nowhere, this rating is appropriate, sorry man!
by RainbowFucktory
Description: What happened to Fluttershy's older sister? why were they seperated for so long? and what will Fluttershy do now that they've been reunited, and how will she hide her dark secrets from the sister who knows her more than even her friends? Rarity has an idea...
Alright... the OC dude is back and still lacking personality other than the fact that he's a total pervert, and this time, he's with Fluttershy instead of Twi. This fic also goes on about topics like high-school shootings. This review isn't very long because I just did not have any strength left after finishing it.
Now, the final rating for this fic is -- drumroll please:
OKAY!
Questionable cover art aside, this fic is similar to the other one but has a less crackfic/trollfic feel and the concept is actually quite interesting, however the story is not told in a good way and touches on the same topic as the other fic.
That's all the fics for today, have a great day my fellow bronies/ pegasisters!
Awesome!: 0
Good: 0
Okay: 1
Pretty Bad: 1
Terrible!: 0
That’s for reviewing my stories :) I appreciate it and yes Rainbine is rainbow dashes sister not cousin hope it clears it up
5746267
Ok thanks, fixed it!
Also, bro, try not to write about touchy (for lack of better words) topics (like highschool shootings), that stuff triggers some people.
5746321
Ok :) I only do when Rainbine is in it because invertedshadow said she’s a parody of the shooters