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BleuBlooms


Writer of odd, strange and thrilling consquences.

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  • 38 weeks
    Posted New Story!

    That's it. Totally a thing. Posting a story. Enjoy! :eeyup:

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  • 38 weeks
    Update! My Long form! Silly Essay's!

    Just a quick update. I am moving my focus onto my long form mystery Lyra-is-a-ancient thing story. Though, I am not sure how long it's going to be at the moment.

    I did write yesterday and on my way to finishing chapter 2. Chapter 1 is very polished. But, I don't want to post my novel ,until the whole thing is done to my specifications.

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  • 39 weeks
    Flash Fiction #13--Aug--1st--2023--Tuesday (WIP)

    This is my work in progress. I was inspired by a story called Lyres Gambit and other Lyra is a weird pone stories. Also, hundred's of stories I have read over the year's.

    So! Enjoy this opening snippet of my new long form!


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  • 39 weeks
    Flash Fiction #12--July--31st--2023---Monday

    I got my first ten by Claude! I am starting to think it's not as difficult (at least in flash fiction?) to push for a ten from a nine. I have this weird block in writing longer paragraph's? Don't know...

    Weird, huh?

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  • 39 weeks
    Flash Fiction #11--July--30th--2023--Sunday

    Nothing to report other ,then this was funner and found a cool title out of it!

    Enjoy!


    Title: He had knelled once.


    “I will bleed you, Alicorn!”

    Sin’s Field’s were aflame. Her Soldier's dead. The whiff of vomit and the last shit linger in the air. And, still he remained, Dawn raised in the blood-red glow of his magic.

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Flash Fiction #11--July--30th--2023--Sunday · 4:27am Jul 30th, 2023

Nothing to report other ,then this was funner and found a cool title out of it!

Enjoy!


Title: He had knelled once.


“I will bleed you, Alicorn!”

Sin’s Field’s were aflame. Her Soldier's dead. The whiff of vomit and the last shit linger in the air. And, still he remained, Dawn raised in the blood-red glow of his magic.

“You will not win Sigbert! Even, if you should murder me and take the throne- the people toppled one Caradaca. They. Can. Topple. Another.” Celery said with a stomp of her hoove.

He laughed and eyes ounce the color of a warm sapphire sky turned-

dark.

Foul.

Those ponies.

Those-

Horn aglow, Hooves burning from a splash of lava, what tear’s she had-

vanished. Hes not going to break. Hes not going to win. You can’t-

Staring at the Apostle of Flame, little Celery Root knew…

she was going to-

“Die!” Sigbert cries thrusting the ruin of a sword at her exposed throat.

I can’t. It hurt’s. It hurt’s. It-

pain. Blood vaporizes. Celery let’s out a wordless cry! Wing’s twitch. Heart-

She jump’s.


“You know I will always be with you, Cel?”

Black mane oiled back. Hooves polished to a silver sheen. He was in the that moment the most beautiful thing she had ever seen.

And, she would have him forever.


As she sail’s among the heat, smog and noxious poison that is the air, she can’t help ,but remember the word’s of her father…

Never give up! Never...ever give. Up!”

She land’s on her hooves.

Horn lowers and a cone of forest green blocked Dawn’s cutting edge.

“Stop, this Sigbert! We can rule together!”

I can’t. I won’t. I shan’t.

He does not deserve me.

Not anymore.

With a cry and a wrench of her magic, Celery Root, Last sane alicorn left in all of The Stormland’s grab’s in burst of green light Dawn, Dawn, the slayer of Tick.

Her brother.

No!

No!”

“No! Celery!”

“No! My name is not Celery ,no longer it is Celestia!”

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