Out With The Old · 3:05am May 2nd, 2023
I've disposed of my story "The First Born" as it is no longer relevant and I can understand that gritty birth scenes are uncomfortable for some people to read and idk WHY I even thought it was a good idea to post, maybe because I was a curious preteen with no shame ( and I still see nothing wrong with reading about birth, it just accomplishes nothing when you write a birth scene with no context before or after and unattached to a bigger story just for birth's sake just because you think it's cute and wholesome ) and I know it wasn't all I'm making it out to be, it's just kinda cringey and not worth reading, but I still think it was a little aggressive and showy, like who cares about this? Oh Applejack has a baby, okay so? We don't have any context on who this baby is or my version of the MLP universe, it's just sorta...random. So yeah I deleted it and am working on what is hopefully a better story involving Cheesepie and life after their kids are born, no getting carried away into birth details or unnecessary descriptions, just fluff, slight romantic spice once in awhile, and baby cuteness <3