Why I removed Twilight and Sunset try making a naughty video: Redux

Hello everyone! I've decided that Twilight and Sunset try making a naughty video: Redux has unfortunately not met my standards when it came to rewriting a fanfic that was objectively still okay and didn't necessarily need to be rewritten.

I only realized this after it had been published and had already began receiving views and votes, so if you notice that the rewrite is missing from your bookshelves that is because it's been taken down.
I have made multiple mistakes during the writing process, for one I was writing late at night when I was very exhausted and wasn't able to produce writing of my normal quality.

Secondly, I had posted the "finished" work when I didn't properly do the final checks that I normally do before I publish a chapter or story to the site.

And lastly, I was rushing to finish the work so I could to go bed since it was around 3am at the time. I should've taken the time to ensure that the "rewrite" was faithful to the original but with some minor/major changes that would improve it significantly.

I apologize for any frustration this may have caused, but mistakes were made and lessons were learned.
I'm going to move on with the knowledge I've gained the past 12 hours and hopefully better my writing as a result.