• Member Since 4th Apr, 2022
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TwiShine45


I write on here periodically. Twilight is still best pony overall, and Izzy & Sunny are best G5 ponies.

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  • 19 weeks
    Merry Christmas & Happy Hearth’s Warming

    Merry Christmas, guys! Just wanted to say how thankful I am for each of you that take the time to read what’s posted here, whether it’s a story or a review or anything in between. Also, keeping in the pony spirit, a very Happy Hearth’s Warming!

    Hope y’all have a fantastic day!

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  • 20 weeks
    Public Opinion Poll

    Hey, everypony! Hope y’all are having a fantastic Christmas season!

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  • 26 weeks
    MLP Make Your Mark: Nightmare on Mane Street Review

    It's the spooky season, fillies and gents, and that means it's time for our favorite G5 ponies to celebrate the best way Equestrians know how...with a good ol' Nightmare Night celebration! But, there are certain questions I have surrounding this entire thing. Those will be addressed posthaste, but for now, let's dive into the meat of this particular grinder.

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  • 27 weeks
    Update Time!

    Hey, guys. Just wanted to let you know a bit about what's going on with me and why I'm not really uploading as much as I'd like to on here. First off, life happens, and it's been happening a lot lately. Secondly, I've kinda hit a bit of a snag on what I want to write about. Pegasi of a Father was going kinda well...maybe...but I didn't really know what I wanted to do with it, so that's why I've

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  • 29 weeks
    MLP Make Your Mark: Mane Smelody Review

    Alright...it's been a while...and, honestly, I'm not sure what my upload schedule will look like on here. Life has more important things than ponies, unfortunately, and I've been all wrapped up in that here lately. Plus, I've...kinda lost what I want to do with the current story. I've hit a bit of the ol' writer's block. In any case, here's another MYM review to tide you over. In this one, noses

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Dec
11th
2022

MLP Winter Wish Day Review · 11:02pm Dec 11th, 2022

Hey, guys! Sorry for the lack of a chapter today. Things were a bit more hectic around here for a Sunday. But, anyway, I don't want to leave the page completely quiet, so I'm gonna be giving you my thoughts on Winter Wish Day. This won't be like my normal MYM reviews have been, but I'll try to be as concise and straight as I can. I'm just gonna say it...this is probably my least favorite thing out of all the MYM stuff released so far. The rushed storytelling, which is already a plague on the series proper, is almost unbearable here. Sure, there are some cute moments, but they literally have the ponies on a time schedule, which leaves absolutely no time for anything close to either acceptable world building or staunch curation of a narrative. In the end, Winter Wish Day just relies on cute ponies doing cute things in the snow.

Also, there's the twist of the unicorns saying "frosty shivers" to everypony and having that be the driving force for a torrential blizzard all around Equestria. On paper, this looks like a harmless, if cliche, bit of lore. It also makes a bit of sense given the events of magic returning to Equestria and the Unicorns still learning how to control it. However, that being said......how does the weather work in this new Equestria? When did the Pegasi lose control of it? These are just two of many questions I have after watching this special...and, really, MYM in general. I really enjoy these new characters. However, they've been given some pretty poor scripts so far. This one, by far, was the poorest. It was rushed, it was clumsy, and I just didn't really like it as much as I thought I was going to. Hopefully, they will learn to turn things around before Chapter 3 or 4 or whatever the next one is comes out next year.

I'm giving it a 2/5

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I personally give it a 5/5.

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