Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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Bit shorter than your other chapters but still, and moon beam is a daemonic filly priceless
71010 Yeah I had to cut this one short due to time constraints. My shifts have changed dramatically at work so I wont be getting off for the next few days till after midnight and I didn't want to leave you guys hangin like that. I'll be working later in the night/early morning for at least the weekend maybe more. I love Moon Beam so much. And she's only demonic if angered. I'll give a little insight into that. She generally can't remember anything that happens while changed like that. She'll occasionally keep fragments of the change but not often.
Not sure if lying or truly caring about your readers
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Either way, glad you got another chapter out, looks like things are starting to kick off. Fates converging and whatnot.
You give us another cliffhanger like that and you'll be choking on aforementioned teeth.
Lol, just kidding, you're alright, brony
71027 Nah I love you guys. I was planning on having this chapter out pretty quickly cause I do absolutely hate being left on cliffhangers like that.
71038 I'll TRY not to, but no promises.
Well I wasn't expecting that twist well done. You know Moon Beam being a filly with that kind of power is outright HORRIFYING! I hate cribbing from other people but like the guys on MLP the Mentaly Advance series said children have no empathy. Throw in the fact that Moon Beam retains few if any memories of what she does in her Dragon Rage mode and you have something that would give pause just about any hero you can name. I'm intrested to see how Moon Beam and Twilight's relationship develops over time. She knows abit about how to react around children thanks to her time with Spike but well that can only carry her along so far.
Brook has got to be either the bravest or most foolhardy mare around not only is she a willing servent of Nightmare Moon who is fairly far up in the higherarchy she's also entering a relationship with her queen's pet/object of desire, she also fully intends to keep said relationship up even though she now knows that Moon beam is going to be around. The only kind of risk I can compaire that too is like feeding pinkie pie nothing but energy drinks for a month then telling her that the dementores of askaban prision could use a good party to cheer them up.
Hmm so far rarity and the others seem to be taking things well, yet she didn't gve them all the full details of things (Most likely for Spike's sake poor little guy.) Though I can only wonder how long hier good cheer will last. Not only will they be more willing then ever to get a chance to free twilight they're also likely to be a bit more overconfident given the recent high of Rarity's surprize good fortune. This could be would ends up botching thier chance at this as the confidence boost may end up making them act with a bit less caution then they would have if this lucky break never came thier way.
I'm Janushyde and this has been another rambling rant.
CUPCAKES DEMAND YOU MAKE CHAPTERS LONGER it also demands more
Dayum, the plot just got so much thicker...
And all that have not seen angry Moon Beam shall underestimate her. Hopefully Twilight gets the word out to her friends before it is too late...
I wonder if Silent Brook realizes it is important to keep her relationship with Twi a secret from Moon Beam?
71858 Hehe 'plot'
71881 Yes. Yes she does. She saw the filly with Nightmare Moon. She assumes that said filly obviously will tell Nightmare Moon EVERYTHING she sees since that's what kids do.
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Lol, no problem. I'm just as guilty as anyone with that sort of thing. I have been known to laugh maniacally upon opening my inbox and seeing all the FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUCK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU comments after a particularly nasty cliffhanger.
You combined all my theories into one
How the hell do you read minds?!?!?
First i thought its some demon, then that it could be a little kid (like i posted in a comment last chapter) then a kid whos NMM's kid
72143 She is NOT NMM's kid, however much Moon Beam may say so. Moon Beam herself will explain the relationship between Nightmare and herself. to Twilight. But yeah, not Nightmare kid.
72143 Also, Magic. I ain't gotta explain shit
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can't argue with that. have some random music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CoL3VzunAc
How old does Moon Beam look? I mean is she the same "age" as the Crusaders, or is she Closer to Pipsqueak in "age"?
Also I hope for the sake of the Spike and the rest that Rainbow Dash isn't with the group when the come across Mean Beam. If she is i don't see things going too well for them. I can see Dash making some kind of smart ass remark that sets her off and well then things go down hill. Granted she wouldn't be happy even if they were politely explained why they were trying to take her "Aunt" Twilight away but that might work out better for them then Rainbow's hot headedness activly pissing her off as twilight showed us.
72630 Lolwut random indeed.
72654 I was imagining something like that. We haven't really seen any 'teen' ponies and when I think foal I think CMC and their group of classmates.
Okay thanks, I wasn't sure what you were going for there so CMC sized not Pip sized.
On a diffrent note I wonder if Zecora will show up in this fic.
72932 That sounds about right. Now get back to it woman. And make me a sammich while you're at it.
Okay guys I've gotta go to work. Sorry the next chapter isn't out yet but I'll finish it as soon as i return. Also, as a forewarning, I'm going to switch this over to mature after this chapter posts so be sure to turn your view mature thingy on Thanks for your patience~
the plot sickens.
Who doesn't like Brook? I like her... It seems like she actually might care for Twilight, but... I am kinda curious since her eyes are the same color as NMM's. Wondering about her past, I am.
I like Brook. She seems to me like Twilight's oasis in the desert, a bit of light in the darkness if you will. I just wonder what the other Elements and Spike are going to do. Also, may whatever supreme deity that resides in that world have mercy on the souls of any who woul cross Nightmare Moon at this point.
Little question: Celestia and NMM are divine royalty and control the sun and moon respectively, but there has to be at least one other person on the planet that could stand against one of them in an even fight, right?
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Discord. Though he trumps both of them together.
277630 What Gwen said, but in terms of magical prowess other than him? No. Ability to match her blow for blow? You'll hafta see. I can't really say too much without spoiling so I'll just say what I've told everypony else. Read and find out
277645 Excellent. Besides Discord, I'm hoping that there can be somepony (or any type of creature) that can put up a decent fight. Powerful characters are awesome, but their weaknesses and shortcomings that can be exploited make them better. On an unrelated note, uploading pictures on this site is a mother. Any tips?
"she's perfectly fine.Well, for now" -
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"Do you doubt my power now, pitiful worm?!"
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*a few lines later*
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"Are you going to be my new aunt?"
I'm begins to like this story more and more.
Hmm... It's ten til midnight... Yeah, I've got time for another chapter! xD FURTHER UP, AND FURTHER IN! ~ALLONS-Y!~
Am I really the only one that likes Silent Brook?
She's one of the few OC characters I have ever read about, that I like (My favourite is probably Mr. Unimpressive in The Immortal Game)
Idk if anyone pointed this out yet, but when asked if she still doubts Moonlight's power, Twilight nods instead of shaking her head.
I want to be Moon Beam
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I wholeheartedly assure you that you are indeed the only one who likes Silent Brook. Sir Unimpressive is awesome, though.
277645 Okay what the fuck is all I can say. Question though "WHEN THE FUCK DID NIGHTMARE MOON HAVE A FUCKING CHILD" not that I am very interested but I have to admit very nice twist
... wat
The moment when you realize that nightmare is not her mother
1798826 ah the irony that you say you like her just wait a few chapters you will change your mind
2193223 I saw it!
XD Ur still a son-of-a-bitch, but ur funny.