Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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What is this? Did I just steal first post?
o shit nightmare moon's gonna have a hell of a time trying to reconcile with twilight. gildas in trouble and the griffons are being a pain again. and so are the tratorous royal guard i do hope that NMM and twi can reconcile before they get back to the castle. anyway i thought you were interchaging between story's?
Wooo! New chapter! Must read this when Im done writing things myself
poor twi, but more so poor rebel getting failecutioned
NMM:now I've fucked up, now I've fucked up, now I have fucked up!
Tyra:miss Nightmare be quiet!
NMM:Suck my regal cunt bitch!
why did that go through my head as Nightmare started crying?
Interesting chapter. I think Twilight and Nightmare will work things out quickly enough once they talk things out.
Edit: I find my self hating WoW more and more...
Poor Twilight. So much abuse.
Also, what realm? I'm on Medivh-US.
Well NMM is going to have to show twilight a lot of remorse for this mistake...
Oh shit, Nightmare fucked up, this is going to be exciting. Overall good chapter, but as Echos said, the whole Tabatha thing is sort of weird, at first I thought they might have just interrogated her, but now, a new maid?
Oh hell no, please no.
Wah! Amazing chapter yet again!
Dunemaul represent!
Anyway, that totally believable relationship complication. Poor Twilight... Also, poor/that bitch Moon... Also, MOONY!!!!!!!
*checks FiMfic*
"Oh, an update, I wonder what it is."
...
>Playing WoW
Argh, my soul! Must.... withdraw to RuneScape....
Nice chpater, somewhat short, but not lacking in plot(or rather, it did lack in that particular region. silly Twilight.)
"Finally, after an eternity of tear-blurred, mis-aimed swings, the stallion's agony ended as his head fell away from the rest of his mangled body."
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I hope nightmare apologizes to twilight in the next chapter and makes it up to her because damn...... that was harsh.
Well… it's four in the morning. I am pretty sleepy. Just going to check my pad one last time, then it's off to Lala land, but wait!!! ATFN update!!!!
(Fighting off big yawn with excitement)
Oh well… I've heard sleep is just a way to practice being dead! In other words its story time
(Must stay awake a little longer…)
That was a good chapter!!! And furthermore the execution scene was awesome! and… and… Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…….
(Pad is now firmly planted in face.)
Oi! Ya dinna explain the horngasm like ya said!
Other than that, great chapter!
NMM dun goofed. I honestly can't wait to see how she handles this. And how Twilight reacts.
On a side note, I stopped playing WoW when I completed the game on several characters. I now have an account that was worth well over a grand back when the gear was shiny collecting dust.
just started the chapter and.... yay for some actually smart Gryphons instead of the brainless we kept seeing since the story started
EDIT: finished reading, Twilight is best executioner *coughnotcough*
and since Twilight was asking questions about sex.... does that mean her second question might have been related to foaling?? oh well, well never know..... (until the question is actually asked, that is)
and I really am surprised Chapter 34 didn't have Rule 34 in it..... (well.... offscreen rule 34...)
Don't worry moony will solve this relationship drama
Fun times!
Also:
"Damn ponies, corrupting Gilda and taking her away from me! I'll show them all what happens when you steal my best friend with their brainwashing."
Times, they be a changing. Twilight can't afford to be so gentle any more. And NMM can't afford to be so harsh either. Seems they both have a lot to learn still.
Also, a feather duster with a feather duster, huh? Interesting.
And, why'd it have to be WoW? Costs so much to play for so much copy pasta game design >.<
574638 Laughing Skull.
576052 Friend wanted me to play it so meh. It has nude mods, so its excusable.
575344 Huh. I know I fixed that before I posted it cause I noticed it when I was once-overing. I guess I fixed it with the same mistake like a failgasmolord.
574603 I was but I'm having issues with ND right now. Can't figure out how I want the current scene to play out and it's frustrating me
574755 Nightmare has reasons for making her a maid (unlike gilda, she knows about the griffon forces and such which would give an edge to the ponies where, currently, the griffons have had the upper hand/hoof) And, honestly, the first thing most people would think of when somepony smashes into something and almost dies is to try and help em. The rest? Had to get her into Nightmare's 'entourage' somehow since Nightmare herself wouldn't have even cared. Twilight's the only being she'd listen to at the present moment. 574758 Plus, it'll be less of a maid and more of a bitch, somewhat akin to Twilight's first position mixed with Brook's stuff, but without the sexual favors. Prolly less abusive as well.
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Yeah, your realm is in pretty much the same state as Medivh. We're the only 25m left. Only competition already left the server or disbanded.
We're still working on H.Spine. Even with the nerf we're having trouble on it. New recruits are slow and usually disappear on us and we had one of our tanks rage quit recently.
Great chapter Peppy, I really enjoyed it. Interesting to know the rebels are still kicking about, if they're as determined as the rebels in the Jao empire series then I can see them being a right problem for NMM for years to come. Not a major faction, but a definite annoyance to her reign.
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Obviously cause' WKUK is the best thing on the planet (besides ponies, of course) and should be referenced to everything.
Malfurion represent!
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Nude mods. Ah, yes. The one thing that makes that game playable. I just got tired of the "Hey, let's do a dungeon raid, so we can get the gear to do this other dungeon raid where we'll get the items we need to get into this other dungeon raid, so we can finish the final raid boss encounter in this area, before moving on to the next dungeon raid area"
I'm sorry to say but other than the strain on twilight and Nightmare's relationship and the reemrugence of the Celestia guard and thier collaberation with the griffons I didn't find to much intresting in this chapter, sorry peppy but I don't think i've got a wall in me today. Though I do now considder it Twilight to be the one who botched Nearly Headless Nick's exicution.
O.o How... THE HELL DID I GET BEHIND?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
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Wait a second... I'm behind... That means... That there's more to read! 8D
Twilight the failecutionar.... She needs a theme song!! 8D
When in doubt on how to properly execute someone: ask Darius, the Hand of Noxus
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He can show you the superior executing technique called the "Noxian Guillotine"
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Oh buck this manure...
*Alondro, the Deux Ex Insert barely has to strain to enter this fic, given how weakly it began in the first place. He stands right in front of Nightmare Moon and Twilight* Both you bitches drop dead. Cero Oscuras. *the shamelessly stolen attack vaporizes their upper bodies instantly, and their legs fall to the ground with a storied clatter*
There is so much idiot-balling going on, I can't help but feel every character is retarded.
Bloody Stupid Rebel, Just stupid Rebel without Cause.
Do know many heart have for stupid people, Millions,
I took all theirs hearts because they don't need one for being as stupid as you, Dumb Rebel
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Everything that I want said to you