Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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Hels yea
Well, Twilight could have handled that better. But so could Applejack. I wonder, would Applejack be more forgiving if she knew what had happened to Twilight before she became Nightmare's lover?
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2699200 Twilight has been slowly losing it, especially after that trip back from Valtaura, but Apple Jack is stubborn in her world-views. That plot-line won't be continued for a little bit, though
blah blah awesome story blah blah 10/10 blah blah
2699221 I would say that every chapter is 20% cooler then the last, but I'm not quite sure that is even possible under the laws of physics.
2699374 I 2nd this statement
P.S. Hi Vikinga
Isn't Applejack one word? Other than that, you better update more Peppy...
2699514 Go back and read since the beginning. It's always been two words
alright I read the chapter and I'm a little disappointed in bot h you and Twilight, you because the chapter didn't really cover much, and Twilight because she just lost two soldiers and she hasn't even gotten a quarter of the way to the dragon/equestrian border.
2699523 Three soldiers total. The chapter wasn't meant to cover a lot, that's what future chapters will be doing. All it was supposed to do is finish up her time in Ponyville. Peppy rarely lets things wrap up completely at the time of the happening.
2699548 soo... we can be expecting another chapter soon?
2699558 Dunno how soon, but I'mma be tryin to write faster. All depends on work and my surroundings I have a lot of trouble focusing a lot of the time.
2699374 Yeah, but since when did Rainbow Dash care about stuff like the laws of physics?
2699568 I can see that with all of the smexyTwilight and Nightmare Moon pics out there.
You've got a typo.
Yeah, it's such a common mistake.
Well, stand by for my thoughts on the chapter!
2699617 It's so hard to catch, especially when you right most of it on a phone without spellcheck
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I'm sure you meant to use write instead of right. But you totally proved your point.
2699637 Sorry, that's because I'm playing Guild Wars I also write looking at the keyboard.
Have I told you before how you're amazing, Peppy?
You're amazing.
2699443hey Dagon!
Okay, so Twilight got some words of encouragement from Rarity, but then a couple of her soldiers caused trouble by trying to take Apple Jack's apples without paying. When Moon Beam's dark side was about to surface to take care of them, Twilight took matters into her own hooves to keep Sweetie Belle from seeing what the lunar filly was like in that sort of situation.
But Apple Jack wasn't exactly grateful. Twilight was lucky just to get those apples from her. Here's hoping Rarity and Pinkie Pie can help that farmer pony get some facts straight and make her realize that if anything, because of Twilight, Nightmare Moon Took a Level in Kindness via Defrosting Ice Queen.
Then Twilight was starting to worry about the schedule and how they were falling behind, but at least Rarity and Pinkie Pie are seeing her off. And I still say that after The Reveal of Twilight's pregnancy, Fluttershy's going to be one of her nurses! That is, I certainly hope I'm right, because if I'm not, there really might not be much of a point to her learning about that sort of thing...
Here's some badges of Twilight and all the ponies in this chapter who are her friends! Well, the ones who have pony approved badges, at least. No Apple Jack because of obvious reasons.
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And Twilight, here's some music to help cheer you up! LISTEN TO MY SONG!!!
Later!
2699585 ... umm what does that have to do with anything? she is Dash not Pinkie after all.
And neither of them are this story.
2699706 Shows how much you pay attention, I guess.
PINKIE PIE WAS IN THE LATEST CHAPTER! YOU KNOW, THE ONE THAT WE JUST GOT?
And Rainbow Dash + Sonic Rainboom = the laws of physics become her bitch! It's that simple!
2699698 Hehe. Fucking love MAcross. Best series of shows ever made (maybe not best, but up there).
2699729 Nice to see another Macross fan!
Just for you, here's a classic song! Hit it, Lynn Minmei!
ppey, I think we're all reasonable enough for you to drop the facade and just tell us something bad is going to go down; you know it, we know it, what's the point of pretending you can write one story arc without at least one important person/objective being blown to hell?
(my guess is they get to the dragon territory, and then the dragons refuse to help, and or start murdering the ambassador(s))
2699757 Hehe, you can assume all you want, but you'll never guess what's gonna happen! Bwahaha!
2699741 FFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK I haven't heard that song in ages. I love minmei
huzzah you're alive
2699764 Well, the latest series isn't that bad, either.
In fact, here's a song that might as well be used as Rainbow Dash's theme song! After all, hearing that she has the wings of a Valkyrie would be the highest form of praise for her, don't you agree?
2699778 I have to admit that I haven't seen a lot of the earlier ones, but Macross Frontier, as compared to most anime nowadays, is fucking god-tier. The songs are so great.
2699774 Of course!
2699789 Well, you might want to check out Super Pony Wars Sigma, a crossover with Super Robot Wars.
It hasn't happened yet, but as soon as Vinyl Scratch enters the story, she's going to be telling enemies to listen to her song!
I'm so glad there is a new chapter.
I really love the way Rarity handled Twilight issue. The way she told her to keep supporting her and to be by her side. I really have to admit that for a fictional character from a fanfiction I really admire Twilight. Even when she's broken down physically and emotionally she never gave up. And that love and compassion managed to change Luna for the better.
I also like the way Rarity hugged Twilight. Awkwardly yet sincerely. And the way she kissed her it was almost as if she could seduce her "as a way to lick her wounds in her soul(I can now see where Brook got her sexy seductive pimp lingo)".
I was a bit surprised at Moonie's reaction to the whole fight between Applejack and those two Lunar guards. I know that she has her "beast" mode but it was almost as if:
1) She was willing to defend Applejack for Twilight's sake
2) She actually adores killing
3) She hates bullies of any kind
It be interesting to see what was Moonie's reaction to Twilight killing those two soldiers brutally.
I'm happy that Applejack made a new appearance but i'm sad that now she's disgusted and scared of Twilight.
But I'm happy to see Pinkie again and she still happy and upbeat regardless of the current situation. Even after Twilight chose to severe as Luna's lover she still cares for her.
I really love the part when Twilight was conversing with Tyra about her taking "control" over her soldiers. The way you handled it was perfect.
Twilight naively believed that since she chose to punish them in a cruel sadistic way that they would respect her and not plot against her even though now instead of disliking her or hating her now they are terrified and scarred of her.
But I'm glad that Rarity and Pinkie where there to at least give her one more bit of moral support before she left. I really hope that Pinkie and Rarity talk to Applejack and at least explain Twi's situation. I know Applejack is stubborn but I really do want her to at least understand(At least for Twilight's sake)
And I would have loved seeing at least a scene of Rar, Pinkie and Twilight having breakfast with Moonie. I want to see Pinkie's reaction to Moonie's hyperactive attitude and to see how Rarity interacts with Moonbeam.
I also loved the way you wrote Twilight. she went borderline psycho and then become a sad blind autistic puppy at the same time. That takes talent.
I hope you update this time a bit more early. Because I really don't want to wait more than 3 months for a new chapter.
Oh and for some sick reason If there is a new "clop" chapter I hope is Luna and the other members of the Mane6 gang banging Twilight as a form to show her love, appreciation, support and to make her happy(And to see if they could impregnate her. I mean since the Mane 6 are the elements of harmony and Luna is the princess of the night(And the queen of Sin as I called her). To see Twi's child have powers that could rival Celestia would be interesting but since they already have Moonie then she would be useless(but at least she would have a new baby brother/sister)) and it could be in the ATFN canon......if that's ok with you.
Dam you Peppy! I only had 3h of slept before work because of you!!! Just had to read the chapter.... so worth it!
Ps: New chapter! Yaaay...
2699789 Oh God dammit, I finished this story in a day and a half. So I have to wonder, was it worth it to finish it so quickly instead of taking my time? The answer is no, probably not. I regret catching up in my haste. Now I shall watch with rapt attention and eagerness.
2700281 Thanks!
I kind of dislike NMM, she feels a bit pathetic as a villain.
NMM: I feel UNDERAPPRECIATED!!!
Celestia: Why don't we talk about it? I'm sure we can figure something out.
NMM: NO! NOPONY LIKES ME! I'M GONNA TAKE OVER THE WORLD!
Celestia: Luna, eat a Snickers.
NMM: WHY?
Celestia: Because you turn into an annoying villain with a really weird inferiority complex when you're hungry.
NMM: NEVER! YOU ARE JUST TRYING TO TRICK ME! I BANISH YOU TO THE SUN!!!
Celestia: Oh but for the love of me... *Banishes NMM to the moon*
That is the night for 1000 years ago in a nutshell.
The list of things that make my day more than an ATFN update is a small one.
Twilight's on the verge of a breakdown and Apple Jack's got her legendary stubborn streak set into hyper drive. I'm surprised that turned out as well as it did. Still, things are not looking good. if this keeps up Twilight's going to have to play a card the USSAR used and put down the deserters and such. I hope it won't escalate to that but considering how bleak things are looking I wouldn't be surprised if it happened.
And the ponies of Trotsdale Rejoice for they are mentioned!
First time I've heard anyone outside of Secondlife use that town name in their fics. I'm sure Empress Aurora would approve.
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But she does. Not her 'pure' form, but she does.
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2701162 I have a focus problem, so I can't guarantee any speed with writing
2701756 Hehe, somebody gets it
2701210 People do crazy things for love, but you have to remember, that's not everything
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I'm kind of glad I read you right. Can you imagine spending all that breath, only to be told via Word of God that you're wrong? (I can, it's happened before.)
Anyway, I caught up on reading and I think you've earned that Like.
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I think he meant how it's actually spelled by.
Anywhere you look (wiki, 95% of other stories, pictures etc) her name is spelled in one word: Applejack.
I caught up....i actually caught up....curse my curiosity to the core...now i have to wait....buck me....
Why is short chapter so short?! Gah! Peppy, you tease! Noticed a couple of things, though:
Did you mean jab? Also, I notice that you keep spelling Applejack as Apple Jack. Just an FYI, it's all one word.
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2702212 I do it for a reason. I mean, I spell it Applejack everywhere else, but Apple Jack here. 'Cause people hate it when I do I'll go through and change it when I rewrite most of the chapters, though.
2702284 It happens in the future, but not exactly like that. Lots of things change between then and the newest stuff.
2703033 I'll fix that, also see above and all previous chapters
2703436 That's about when the editors kinda dropped off I've been flying solo since about then. I'll get to the other mistakes in a min.
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This is wrong. Sometime indicates "at some unspecified time" I.E. how I used it.
Some time means quite a while like: "I think I'll spend some time listening to Metallica"
2703157 There is, it's double spaced or whatevs (triple? Two empty spaces. Looks like fimfic's just a faggot
2703401 It's funny, because 36.1 does and gdocs does. This is the only one of the three where it's like that
dafuq
2703809 The space you have quoted is fine. The one after it that you don't have quoted is not, though
2701956 It's quite alright. I'm just annoyed at myself!
*gasp* Finally!
Took me almost all day, but I finally finished this story. Up to where it is, anyway.
Dude, this is such an amazing story. Had me hooked the whole way through.
Can't wait to see future updates!