Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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I clicked on my favs and saw ATFN update. I rapidly click on the new chapter but- Hay wait! There's only the clop-lite version!
-wait 20 seconds and refresh-
Ah! There it is! :D
Thanks for the update!
1999343 Hehe. took it a few to publish the chapter Enjoy~
1999371
Oh yes, enjoy I will :3
Ah would o' called it "On the Precipice of the Terminus" 'cause it denotes a transition from a darker ta a warmer Moon but ya' unwashed heathens wouldn't o' found the referendi!
crap...I forgot who sweet is...fuck my life...
1999515 She's the traitor that was providing info to Steelfeathers
1999527
Is she a foal, I refuse to read further into the clop scene until I figure this out.
Commence read.
Might as well read both.
1999534 No.
1999371
Damn it Peppy! I require more of the last scene! Now!
Hum that is, if you don't mind to...
It was really nice, and I'm happy to see that things will finally get moving in the next chapters.
Way to make my day peppy, truly this is a dark power you hold, one with great responsibility
1999608
THANKS
Yay peppie has new chapter Everyone It is a miracle of the moon. Celestia's sun has fallen and the night has begun anew let us rejoice with this new set of awesome clop and story.
Straight sex?! Who the hell are you and what have you done with Peppy?
1999957 I know, right? Such blasphemy, but I felt it fit, not matter mow much I don't like the idea
1999728
1999630 Bwahaha! Let the evil flow~
1999631 Not sure if good... or bad.
another wonderful chapter.
2000397
First, I would like to point out this:
The only one I would willingly forget about is Spike Fuck I hate Spike.
Otherwise, No I did not plan with Pen. In fact, I still haven't told him I made his filly fuck my filly and some other filly, too!
Twas my favorite ability!
Too bad she has tiny pony legs
Figured everypony had guessed that by now, teehee. Maybe not.
2000399 Didn't savor that for long, now did ya?
2000397 I think you broke your comment.
2000397
Also, happy birthday. Can't believe I looked that over.
Sees update.
Has this reaction:
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Well, first off, let me start by saying that Cloudy is epic. How epic?
THAT'S how epic! All she needs now is a Masamune!
So Jahurl was willing to give Ms. Scoop a chance. I guess...*sunglasses*...that was pretty sweet of him. YEAAAHHH!!!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
Also, Twilight's going on a mission to Drakenridge?
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And Tyra's going with her? Well, she already Took a Level in Badass when she proved that she's a Lethal Joke Character last chapter, so why not? After all, they have Moon Beam to take care of anything Tyra can't handle.
Nightmare Moon's response to Twilight's confession...her words almost gave me a cavity along with bringing me within inches of diabetes! Loving Nightmare is best Nightmare!
Also, it's nice to see that Twilight can still pull a Rapidash!
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Did you and Pen Stroke plan this? Because you posted this on the same day he posted a new chapter of Winter Bells! THE LUNAR FILLIES HAVE BEEN DOUBLED!!!
Also:
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Here's a couple of pony-approved badges!
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All I can say in conclusion is, please don't forget about Spike and the other Elements of Harmony...
By the way, it was my 26th birthday yesterday, so I hope you don't mind if I consider this a slightly belated birthday present!
2000454
Then scale it down to a size that she can wield while still allowing it to be a BFS!
2000623 Hehe, it'd be plausible, but Equestria hasn't even started trade with Neighpon yet.
Man peppy.... you don't disappoint do you?
Also,
2000454
FINALLY!!!! Ive been waiting for this Chapter for a longtime. I started Reading this Fic and Fell in love with Nightmare Moon. Bad thing about me though I only found this fic after you posted the last chapter. Please Write Quicker lol. Way to good of a Story. I might just start from the beggining again and reread the entire thing lol.
2000794 I aim to please
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2000802 My suggestion is to read slower I can only write so fast with stuff going on
2000819 Kinda hard to read slower when the only thing on my mind is damn Nightmare Moon cause of you... I cant find any other Romance of Nightmare Moon with Twilight and with how you write it... i want more.... im Completely in love with that damn evil mare now
2000840 I was too~ So I wrote this 'cause the only other good one I had read was a comedy and died out in its prime.... I'm looking at you, Nightmares Don't Last Forever....
2000850 Nightmares might not last forever, but Nightmare Moon does and will rule all FOREVER!!! Muahahahahahahaha!
Moar!!!!!!!!!
2000879 Never! Hiatus for 6 months time! BYE~! *leaves without looking back*~
2000927 Things were more strict, but even so, the ponies still loved Celestia and not her. There isn't a difference between Nightmare and Luna. They are two sides of the same coin, Nightmare just being the name she gave herself. She is just the unrestrained psyche of Luna.
I sleep now though, so all further inquiries will be replied to after work tomorrow.
1999371 I love this fiction so much, it is just so fucking beautiful, and the way you've made Twilight and Luna interact and grow...
Ah yes, was wondering how long it would take you to get to the pony-popping minotaur sex
Great work as always, Peppy!
Things are sure getting interesting here. Could have used more Moonie, but then everything could use more Moonie.
PS. I'm still planning on stealing Moon Beam from you.... Eventualy..
You never cease to amaze, well done peppster. Also, what's the the age of twilight's flank branding? I know this was dealt with in the past a bit but I would be interested to see more of twilight's thoughts on the branding. I believe she said she didn't care about it, but that seemed like it was a 'heat of the moment' sort of thing and that it would come back to bother her in the future. I just see a cutiemark being as important to a ponies identity as a person's face. Just curious about how you think twi deals with it.
2000543 Fixed!
2000644 Well, they'd better start soon, then, because if anypony deserves such a badass sword, it's Cloudy. I'm just glad she has Cherry Tart and Moon Beam to keep her from pulling a Face Heel Turn the way Sephiroth did in Final Fantasy VII!
2000915 Seriously? We all love this story!
Please let that be a case of trolling,,,
2001322 Depends on what you are asking. I don't know what you are referring to exactly.
2001401 Knock yourself out, or her up (just as long as it doesn't involve any colts/stallions *nods*
2001946 Certain things are less important than the survival of a country/winning a war. That's not to say that it won't be readdressed later, though. It's not that old either. I don't remember the exact date, though. I'm too lazy to look right now.
2001053 Thankee~~~~
2003589 I have to literally look up every single one of those terms you pop in here! I'm not a troper in the least
2003629 Of course it's trolling. Only reason I'd go on hiatus is if I have life issues that require it. Like a case of dead.
2004572 I'm happy that you at least haven't forgotten and you do have a point with the war. Easy to forget things when your leading an army.
2004671 They didn't forget though. If you notice, Nightmare is cautious when dipping Twi into the water and Twi cringes from the burning.
2004715 I was merely referring to the emotional impact of it. You know, identity crisis, or seeing evidence of some of the past comments to her about being a pet. Possibly thinking she may have had Stockholm Syndrome or something of the sort. These are all hyperbolic examples and I'm sure you have an idea of what you want for that aspect of Twi. I just want to clarify what I thought seemed to have been forgotten or ignored. Wow, that sounded kind of snobby, but I really mean all respect. Hope you have a good day!
2004572
Hehehe, don't tempt me XD
And on a side note, I really, REALLY miss the extra emoticons. The script hasn't been working in weeks it seems...
2004572 Good, because if you were planning to go on hiatus, I'd have to hunt you down, chain you to a computer, get my whip out...you get the picture, I'm sure, so why don't you get to work now?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
1999997
Double Entendre!
Wow, it had been so long since the last cloppy chapter updated, that I forgot you made clop-light chapters too. When I saw the double update I was all ecstatic. Ah, well. An excellent update, especially the cloppy bits. And it's about time Twilight admitted to Nightmare about how she still feels for Celestia. It'll certainly make for an interesting reunion. Also:
Do to the nasty arrvel of actual winter in Wyoming along with Janurary just trying to eat my free time for fun I must sady confess that the following Wall-O-Text is two days late.
Wall-O-Text!
This was a great chapter and a needed one. Plenty going on here for me to prattle about in ypo laiden text so away I go!
First the begining was excilent! I really got a feeling for how cornered twilight was feeling. Trapped between the ideals so grew up with, the reality of the situation, fear of dissappointing her lover, and caught by the fear of her actions forcing her second mother and mentore to turn her back on her for what she had to do. Add in Nightmare not answering her mental calls and i feel that you really captured how alone Twilight felt.
Then when Nightmare Entered as Cloudy and gave Twilight that pep talk i think things were handled fairly well. It did inded seem to be how the pegasus would have handled the situation. Though I can only wonder when if ever Nightmare intends to tell Twilight the truth about that little pep talk. I know that it can wait for a while but the sooner the better. I don't think the insodent would hurt their relationship but it still shouldn't be kept secret.
It really is an intresting sincaro to play out there. Nightmare using the form of another to give Twilight the encouragement she needed to do a task that so goes against who she is. I can only guess as to weather or not Nightmare feels anything be it positive or negitive about her methods here.
Then we had the war room bit. That was quite intresting. Not only did we get a bette idea of the stratigies that Nightmare's Equestria intend to use now. We also get some more follow up on Scoop. I wonder what her ultimet fate will be? She seems to be smitten with Jarhul but is that and fear of death going to be enough to keep her on the straight and narrow now? She's already prooven she's willing to sell out Eqestria to the Gryphons before.
Still she might be past that now as the aformentioned combination of fear and apprent infatuation, if not love seems to have shifted her priorities now.
Though what seems to be the real big issue here is the mission that Twilight's going on. An emmisarry to the dragons. I'm not sure how that will pan out but I'm doubting that it'll be predictible given how Peppy gav his little laugh and we all know he likes to do terrible things to our minds. you know "show me on the doll where he touched you" type of things.
Still there are a LOT of intresting posscibilities here. Anything from this becoming a three sided conflict, to the dragons staying out of things ll together or even having a few join Equestrai's war effort or more could happen. Really that's what I love about this story Peppy tends to leave us with some many apprent possciblities then pull the rug out from under our feet. I for one wasn't expecting Tryo to be the next leader of the gryphons.
finaly I think the scene in the bathchaimber was very well handled and was a long time comming. nightmare indeed has been more on the receaving end of twilight's affection though it isn't as if she's been entirely cold to her after they became a couple. Still for her to admit that and to understand just how much Twilight truely just needed to be close to her tonight shows her growing more and becoming a better person to Twilight and overall though the later's slower in coming as she's still quite quick to anger as her rather direct threat to a close allie tonight shows us.
Wall-O-Text!
Well that's all from me for now hope my delayed ramblings didn't dissapoint anyone.
2009257
She said she didn't like using underhoofed tactics like that, but she isn't going to tell Twi. Twi believes that Cloudy was the one that came and Nightmare knows Cloudy won't tell her, so there isn't any need to.
I wouldn't call it love, really. She is somewhat stricken with him in the 'You're my saviour' sense, but it mostly boils down to respect that he did so much to help her, fear that Nightmare will kill her since she's on the shit-list now, and fear that Jahurl will kill her if she does fuck up. She knows what happens. She's heard tales of what Nightmare's done. It's never fast and painless. Plus, favours are a good way to help repay somebody.
Oh, come now. You can't say I do stuff like that..... We all know it goes so much deeper than just touchy-feely.
I think you meant minotaurs
While the rest is true, this was quite justified. They've had a shitton of issues with info leaking resulting in much catastrophe, so rules need to be set and guidelines adhered to. Treason is a crime way up there on the punishment list. Right next to the rape with a razor-wire strap-on kind of thing. Death penalty worthy. She did certainly need to start showing more affection, though, so why not in a scene perfectly befitting it?
2012084 Love or not she seems to be adorring him far more then one would expect even given that he just saved her from being something else the castle maids had to clean up with a turckey baister.
Yeah that gryphon typo is hilarious. Though... it could still come true. Break the back of te tribes, hand it to Jarhul to do with as he pleases and when Tryo succeeds him boom my flub comes into being. not going to happen but still posscible.
Raser wire condom? You're slipping I'd thought you'd same something like being forced to give a rock hammer a blowjob. Nothing says "Chuncky salsa" like a tool used for busting concreat.
Ah yes your tendanceis to screw wit the reader's ead, be it suspending us of cliffs, putting our brains in paint shakers, or giving us mental images that the critters spawed from lovecraft's worst acidreflux nightmare would be calling to arrange an appointment with their shrinks rather then deal with. Still it's worth it all to get my fix and see the next chapter.
great chapter!