Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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On way to the Magic Flute, and I see this update. Nearly crash out of joy, whilst squeling like a fangirl. Will read after the Flute.
3623574 And what did I just say in my blog post?
Some people just don't listen, it seems.
...Twilight better be alive somewhere or no one will be able to awaken the mare in the Nightmare.
Are you ever going to reveal what happened to Twilight?
3623983 EET'S PONEZIRA!
And, no. I figured I'd let it remain a mystery.
Srsly, though. I will, but not yet.
3624001 Okay.
Oh, and correct Japanese pronunciation is Ponjira. Ponjira.
3624032 I like mine better.
After so many chapters of analyzing Twilight's mental state (and repeatedly diagnosing Stockholme Syndrome), Nightmare now has even more overt symptoms of mental problems. Here's hoping that after they deal with all of this the two of them finally deal with their issues. They have a lot to work through.
did you mean Minotaur and pony alike?
Also, my bet is on them winning you said there'd be a sequel
3624193 Fucking phone needs to die in a fire. I'll get that fixed.
3624097 They'll hafta eventually, or even more trouble will arise, amirite?
I truly did not expected to see a new chapter.
So apparently Luna was almost starting to go insane without Twilight. Her guilt and despair was now starting to break her.
Luna trully loves her. She loves her embrace, she loves being around her. and it's weird because Twilight was pretty much a pacifist. she did not liked violence. She wasn't physically strong and yet Luna loved her. I find that incredible.
I really loved the way you handled Luna talking to herself thinking that she was talking to Twilight. At 1st I thought that Twilight was in a way talking to Luna through their soul link. Until I realized it was just Luna's imagination.
I also really love the way she comforted Cherry. she's really starting to change for the better. And they slept together. Maybe Cherry wanted to sleep with her as a way to comfort Luna. She's really starting to get brave.
Also I love the way you wrote Luna in this chapter. That even after all the positive changes she still the dreaded Mare of the Moon, and she's still in a way a sadistic crazy lustful warrior. I honestly think Luna should be named the Queen of Sin Nightmare Moon(lame name but I think it would suit her since in a way she's the opposite of Celestia)
And in a strange way now her army is pretty loyal and obedient to her. Is it that they saw that Luna changed for the better that now they are willing to serve, obey and love her?
Still I'm really happy that Luna is finally taking action and that Cherry is accompanying her to find Moon Beam.
I really hope Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Moon Beam and Cloudy are OK. i don't want them to get hurt. Twilight is ok right? Was she captured by the griffons? Are they abusing her?
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Well, you hafta think that they finally have a common goal in mind: Defending their home from a common enemy. Before, they were fighting against brothers/sisters in a civil war brought on by her arrogance.
Guess you'll hafta wait till I reveal it to find out, eh?
3624286 Indeed.
Poor Nightmare Moon going insane with imagined grief. Twilight is OP.
Tart comforting her was very sweet, even if she was clearly terrified for most of it. I also hope Gilda and Dash make it out of this alive.
I can't wait for more.
3624983 She needs to be nerfed.
3625199 I'll have it fixed. Most of this is typed on my phone, so swype has difficulty determining what I want on certain words.
I dont get it. Twilight is really dead?
3626496 Who knows? We'll just hafta wait and see, won't we?
3627044 I just put one out like yesterday.
Everybody is worried about Twilight and I'm just sitting here wondering how Discord hasn't shown up yet.
3635476 Plot reasons. I find it silly that all it took was a bit of unruly children to release him.
Been wondering if rage Twi going ponyta would be canon here as it would be interesting to see moony's reaction, or her being to explain it...
the
Didn't italicize the m in boom.
Ohboyohboyohboyohboyohboy! We gets ta see Moonbutt cut loose on the griffons! I expect to see a good showing from her! Cry Havoc, and let slip the dogs of war!
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This makes me wonder if there's some sort of reverse Stockholm Syndrome...
3636397 There is. I believe it's called Lima Syndrome.
3636285 It's canon. I think I've had her do it twice, and I know at least once.
3636397 I'mma throw my phone out the window. I j/k, though. This phone is sexiest shit, but I'll get it fixed.
Anyway, with all the talk of Nightmare destroying the griffons, there hasn't really been anything said about her hallucinating.
3626496 Considering Peppy's left her fate completely vague for 3 chapters? No
3663861
Peppy doesnt update much.
3663861 Believe what you want.
3664392 I update more often than most of the other 'known' MoonLight fics.
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What i believe is that doing an "is twilight pregnant" subplot only to kill her off immediately without it going anywhere is dumb and is the main reason i think twilight isn't dead.
Sad thing is, he's not even joking.
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I just want to say that I have neither confirmed nor denied that this is a thing.
Also, how would it be dumb? That'd be extra fuel to add onto the fires of hate that are pushing Nightmare to destroy the griffons and defend her shit!
We shall see....
Peppy does not joke. I mean everything that I ever say, ever, because I'm Harry Pot- wait.... But yeah. That's some trufax.
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Well, i have one other reason, but mentioning it would make me feel like a smarmy prick, so im not going to.
Seriously, it seems like there's some kind of curse where most people who make these kinds of stories take forever to update
3668059 Well, my curse is a shortening attention span and work. Also, I know the reasons, but not everybody does.
Okay caught up and to reacap
One Twilight is pregnant
Two she's miising along the DrakonRange
Three Nightmare Moon is piised and depressed
Four Tart has a secret crush that she doesn't know yet on Moon Beam
Five Dragon's will be pissed at the Griffions
Six Gilda has been captured and Rainbow stands at Death's Door
Seven Trotingham is gone
Eight Fluttershy has a crush
Nine everybody that has a crush on Rianbow has died or been severally injured
Ten Celestia is just missing now apparently
Eleven Commander Horizon's is a crafty mare and adoptive mother yay!
Did I miss anything
oh Twelve Twilight has fewer friends in ponyvile because AJ is a bitch with trust issues
3675781
Still not confirming or denying
Dunno
Yup
Definitely
Not quite
Yesssss
Sadly
For sure
Kinda?
Not exactly
Damn straight
Not that I can really think of?
Sad, but true
3676103
Not confirming or denying aside Twilight is pregnant
She has morning sickness, a late and lengthened estrus cycle, Emotional issue's and apparently Carrot craving's.
Sounds like my mom when she was carring my brother
3676146 Estrus is typically a mid-summer ordeal, seasonal thing, and the emotional issues can have many sources.
3676205
true but estrus for a pony is like a period for women, a late or long lasting period is a sighn of something up in some cases, and pregnancy is shown to have strong ties into emotions due to hormonal influcies, but yes it could be many things
But till I am proven differently I stand by my idea
3676519 Well, it's long past her cycle time (several months) and all of this fun stuff started recently. Anyway, we probably won't ever know.
Another great chapter. Shame on me for putting off reading it so long. But That aside I loved all of it. From Nightmare working through her issues somewhat, to her interactions with Cherry to the final scene with the troops being rallied. I can't wait to see what's next. Bravo peppy you've once more done it again! Got me eager to read what's next and over analyzing every little detail to make sure that I don't miss a clue somewhere.
3677861 Cry me a river, build a bridge, then get over it.
It's a weak story. Name-calling critics won't change that.
3678527 Still just butthurt that your stuff won't amount up to it without pandering.
please tell me you didnt kill off twilight please
4246130 IF YOU DID......