Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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I need to sleep god dam it!!!
Sleeeeeep...
Oki just one little chapter more I guess?
You my good Peppy will keep me from enny shut eye to night...
And a love you for it!!!
I'm slightly mad you managed to make Horsepower work in a non mechanical sense here, given it should be expected because they are ponies...:
Also, Twilight forgot to check her symptoms at the clinic, unless she just didn't write it for privacy reasons or something; and you probably will write something later to make it look intentional if it wasn't.
I wonder when Twilight will remember the side effect of the spell she convinced Nightmare to use. You know, that one intimate moment between them...
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3095303 Gotta have horsepower outside of cars, sir. Oh, there's plenty to be had here. So much stuff is planned for the next couple chapters.
3095336 Who said there were side-effects?
Sitting here in France, at 1:30, in the morning, just finished the penultimate draft of the review.
So for the sake of my ritual, and OCD can I know either: a) your favourite and least favourite parts; or b) what you thought you did best and what you fell short. As I've said I like to have a comment from the author. Thanks!
P.S please keep in mind you don't have to.
P.P.S Earlier when I mentioned stabbing I didn't mean people I mean straw dummies etc.
P.P.P.S My cousin signed on with me so other works will be getting reviews, he'll also be looking at the chapters I avoided, he's a bit more partial towards clop-fics etc.
Sorry for the disorganization.
3095344 The spell from Of Love and Warfare.
Zoom in.
There's your problem!
3095344 Peppy, you're alive?!
3095382 Who said it was a side effect? It's just a poorly tested spell.
3095383 I never die! Srsly, though. I ain't gonna stop any time soon!
3095373 Favorite would probably be the bit in Valtaura, and least favorite would be chapter 4. The rest? Fuck if I know!
Thanks, enjoyed chapter 48, do you want the g doc file when it's done?
3095416 Sure!
Who and where should it go to?
(While my cousin has been here for years I only just started using this outside of the fan labour wiki and eq daily so yeah kinda new to this) and my cousin lives in Australia so no help from him right now, or my Irish friend who's currently in hospital after getting stabbed....
P.S Seriously though will there be a 2 year birthday chapter.
3095401 Well, whether it's a side effect, a poorly tested spell, or a side effect of a poorly tested spell, she needs to remember that part. Because if she doesn't start eating right and taking better care of herself, she'll probably have a miscarriage, and that would not be a good thing to have happen.
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Well, I forgot about this but I've got about 1 picture for each awesome scene...
That I can also draw and computerize, so yeah thats about 35 and 10 of those are already hand drawn. Yeah... This "holiday" has just been me skypimh, drawing and writing in the hotel while my friends go out and get drunk... it's like a home away from home...
3095448 Probably? It won't come until September, though.
I'm assuming you mean the review, right? I'd just just pm me the link. Just click the little letter symbol by my name at the top and send it that way.
3095495 I know that fell, except I still go out and get drunk. Especially considering my birthday is Sunday and I just got paid.
3095488 For certain.
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3095543 In time. I have stuff that needs done. Like getting drunk tomorrow and Sunday as I celebrate my birthday.
Shit... Someone anyone help...
My mates got back, with the entire collection of Neon Genisis Evangelion in their arms...
They're going to make me watch it!
I can't watch Evangelion... Not now...
3095606 But it's such a great show.
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I can't betray CodebGeass, Gundam, Soul Eater...
Not after so long.
I adore anime/manga (that should be obvious cause me and everyone here with me are writing one, but while Evangelion is great there is too much, fuck that there's never to much Evangelion, like Metallica actually, hmm, anyway I have to drive to Switzerland tomorrow for work with these guys, and fuck it Evangelion has to wait.
Nah, I can be irresponsible once in my life... Right? Right?
Urgh, they could have at least waited to watch it...
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Why are you laughing at me...
This is a horrible dilemma.
I can watch Evangelion, or miss the board meeting and start having to take commissions again, cause fuck no I'm not writing another study of the moon.
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Nope that ain't happening, not getting drunk, and now I have to sleep through Evangelion...
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Only now has the true magnitude of what I must do become clear to me.
Why!?!
3095689 Can always watch it later.
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When?
I'm in Switzerland a week, then I'm finishing up the review with Matthew and Jordan, then the fan art, then work, then the manga's weekly chapter, then I can watch it at which point it'll be a good deal into it, and if there's a marathon it's from the beginning.
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Seriously, roles reversed what would you do?
3095734 I sleep very little anyway and rarely get hangovers, so don't ask me.
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Fuck no, I'm watching Evangelion, but should I reorganize my schedule.
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Nope screw it my priorities are already to fucked up as it is... So one issue in my world sorted, watching Evangelion while drunk is always fun, I can understand why Twilight is so smart, living life by a checklist is so much... Ugh... easier.
Great so now I've been dragged into a debate on who is best pony
Is it
A. Twilight Sparkle.
B.Luna (Woona)
C. Vinyl Scratch or.
D. Spike... (Sorry, I meant useless twat, or as I like to call him, entity who can no longer be referred to by name as names imply a sense of dignity or purpose in life beyond being a useless twat or door mat).
I'm really happy to finally see an update to ATFN. While it was just a journal of Twilight's experiences being without Luna it was still interesting.
I was kind of amazed that Twilight still remembers the time she was "raped" by those guards. I thought that with her experiences with Luna and the carnage she was forced to stomach through made her forget.
I guess Twilight finally figured out that she was already pregnant with Luna's child. but I was surprisingly shocked that her carnal desires were starting to develop more and more(almost becoming uncontrollable). For some strange sick reason I wound't mind if Twilight ordered her soldiers to mate her as a way to vent her sexual frustration but if she did that then she'd be cheating on Luna and that's no good.
But would Luna care? It be weird if Luna was not only ok with it but supportive of it.
But I'm happy that Moonbeam is still Moonbeam. She almost acts like Pinkie Pie(wound't be surprised if she managed to be one of her past past past relatives).
Also you made a reference to the future Heart's Warming eve chapter!
Also if Luna is the Queen of the Night and Twilight is now a princess does Twi now get a title too? Like Princess of Sin?(If I recall since she sexually pleasured Luna publicly, proudly and hungrily by her own will) I think it might be a sexy title.
Then again ATFN Twilight is already sexy for being a princess, a warrior, a pleasure slave and an adorable bookworm at the same time. Maybe that could be a new name! The Adorkable bookwormish warrior princess sex slave Twilight Sparkle!
Anyway I can't wait to read the next chapter. I expect something tragic and horrible happen to Twilight and I can't wait to see more of Twilight's sexual frustrations(Maybe she could use the dragon bone to "please" herself).
YUSS!!! update!!
Good chapter :D, just wanted to point out one thing
Im assuming it should be
Knowing the volatile nature of where we are headed
without the period :) just though Id let ya know
3096061 Probably wrote that bit on my phone. It has a habit of putting a period and capping a word if i space more than twice.
If Twilight is actually pregnant I wouldn't be surprised. I've suspected as such since her "going away present" from Nightmare.
And it would seem you are hinting at Twilights group gaining some dragon friends at the end. That or Moonbeam did her thing.
Moar intrigue please.
Keep up the good work Peppy!
P.S. Use the boost to get through!
Loved the chapter peppy. it's been a while since we climbed into Twilight's head like this I found it a welcome change of pace. I was confused at first why Twilight was scratching out key parts of her journal but then it dawned on me that she was keeping information hidden to a degree.
Though what I found most interesting was how she was continuing to struggle with her position, between the troops still not wanting to obey, a few deserting and several different ambushes I think she's handling things the best she can given her lack of leadership experience and oh so utterly screwed up people skills. Add it what seems to be dealing with pregnancy and you have a real double whammy of bad luck on her part.
I can't wait to see what comes next ad what exactly went down here. I've got a feeling that things are still far from smooth sailing no matter how little they seemed to pick up right here.
As a side note nice icon Nightmare looks cute in it but also very sad though that could just be me.
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If it was an apple device you can turn that off
Finally, an update! I liked the journal entries. It kinda reminded me of reading Dracula (which confused the Hell out of me when I first saw it; never read a book written that way). I notice that there were several mistakes sprinkled throughout. I could probably wave off the ones made in the journal entries as Twilight being especially tired, but the ones in the regular prose should be tended to.
ATFN has updated; This calls for a celebration! CHEESE FOR EVERYONE!!
Shit, probably not gonna get a chance todo this later...
Anyway if you are reading this...
Happy Birthday!
3098721 I'll hafta go over it. I'd have done it yesterday, but I was too busy getting plastered for my birthday today.
3099087 Cheese is good.
3101554 That was also a spell, so she doesn't consider that as a possibility since it wasn't 'real'.
3102469 Thankee!
Well, happy birthday! I was actually born on the 7th of this month, myself!
3103777 Oho! Four Augusters! Both my dad's and my birthday are today and my sister's is the 21st. Now we have another!
Also, happy belated birthday.
3104283 Thankee!
3095401 Can you blame me?! You just stopped!
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The 21st? You've got to be kidding me. One of my niece's is on the 21st! I also have a sister on the 15th. Quite the co-inky-dink, huh? Oh, and thank you for the birthday wishes.
This chapter was pretty awesome. I don't know if I like the implied pregnancy. It just seems a bit cliché for this story which is otherwise refreshingly unique in so many ways. Also, I love the names for dates in this universe and the latest month name revealed made me snicker (Peguary? ). Regardless of impossible pregnancy I'm still rooting for this story and I want to find out what happens next. Who knows? Perhaps my assumption is way off.
Peppy, I am getting antsy waiting for the next few chapters!
I finished it all in 3 days now I find myself checking for updates and new chapters!
How often do you release new chapters?