Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
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191985 It's up now in fact
Haha, both version is good. Keep up the goddamned good work Peppy Greyskull! *salutes*
192103 Oh it was there. Weak, but there. It just fully blossomed during sex. Hehe blossomed. They could sense the pain and such beforehand, but it was easily shrugged off.
In the clop-lite version the last words were time to come together......was that intentional, because if it was I salute you.
It's nearly 1 and It took you long enough! blach, now I can stop depriving myself of sleep. you monster. I'll have more to say later. Thanks for getting this out!
I clicked the link, stared and let forth a booming HA!
192142 It was. Very intentional.
192143 Sorry it took so long. Totally wasn't my fault. Only half.
I have the weirdest boner right now.
Was Twilight wearing her circlet during this?
192168 Yes. She never took it off.
192160 Weird? Boners are not weird sir. Perfectly normal. Unless its on your forehead.
192178
True, that is very true good sir, it seems like it is not the weirdest boner then.
DUDE DUDE MAYBE YOU SHOULD MAKE HOT MINOTAUR ON HORSE SEX
just kiddin
cool shit as always
192178
Doen't it cover her horn? So does this mean it carries sensation just like her horn would? Fun.
So much to say well best stop slacking, time to get out the brick and mortor because it's time for a...
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Well this was a very welcome surprise. We get some world building, development of the Nightmare Twilight relationship, steamy goodness, and definet confermation on the Minotuars aiding Equestria in the war. We also got answers about Moon Beam Woo!
First up we find out not only how it was the Minotuars were in the area but also abit on thier thoughts on Nightmare Moon. they seem to be mostly unconcerned with her being the current ruler of Equestria, but seem to understand her importance as the goddess of the moon.
I can see them being willing to fight against the griffons and because of this sending out a diplomatic envoy to Equestria. My one minor concern about this is the timing, why didn't they try and establish contact with them sooner? I guess it would make sense for them to wait for a time to allow the new goverment to settle into place as aside from Twilight, Cloudy, and a few other supporters the vast majority of the nation has no love for Nightmare Moon and probly won't for some time yet even after the griffon issue is put to rest.
Now as for the Minotuar envoy spotting the fracous with Nightmare and the griffons I really don't see any problems there. Not only is something the size of her personal sky carridge being attacked, dropped, then blown apart with fire going to be noticleble it is then followed up with Nightmare throwing around magical Lightning bolts like a earger young black mage. That kind of lack of subltly is going to get noticed really they were lucky that a manticore, or pack of timber wolves weren't attracked by all of that commotion.
At long last we learn just how Moon beam came to be. Her abilities make sense now as not only is she in part a magical construckt she also seems to have been given a small fraction of Nightmare Moon's power to use, witch she does in the glorously creative and destuctive ways that only a child with a vivid imagination can. Though i really don't know how to classify her it doesn't feel right to call her a golem or humungculous yet she's abit removed from your typical pony as well. I'd almost say that she seems to be similar to Alpha the creation of Dr. frankenstine in some ways yet that doesn't seem quite right either, bah I'll just let Peppy deside the terminology it's his fic after all.
So Twilight was indeed saved by a variation of the spell used to alter/save Moon Beam. this is very intresting as well. I like that we find out just how similaur yet diffrent Twilight's situation is to moon beams it makes for an intresting contrast especialy given that Moon beam was created to save a life lost by rage and carelessness, while Twilight was saved thanks to her own self sacrofice provoacting empathy from Nightmare. I wonder just how much more powerfull the bond between Twilight and Nightmare is now that thier latest stratigic meeting has caused the bond to fully bloom into existence?
Ahh worldbuilding, it is by far one of my favorite parts of any scifi or fantasy setting. seeing just how similar yet diffrent a world is to our own is very fun. Then comes the reward of seeing how much of a living breathing being unto itself it is thanks to the work of the author who took the time and effort to create it. While we are only given brief glances at the nation of the Minotuars via the atmosphere of the city and the discriptions given by Jahurl, but also by the details provided by the setting itself. For example the architecture of the buildings, the abundence of metalworking, the layout of the city and even the notations about tradition through folklore and even how they bathe. It really is the little details that make a setting seem alive and real that reword the reader for thier time and attention. While a picture is worth a thousend words sometimes it is the pictures that the reader's own mind crafts from the raw mateirals provided by author and story that are far grander works.
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Well I've run out of steam for the moment so I'll chat with you all later. Hope this wall passes enpextion by the formen.
192248 It feels like she's wearing nothing at all. Like she's wearing nothing at all. Wearing nothing at all. Nothing at all. Nothing at all...~
192321 They didn't exactly have to until recently. I'll explain later in the story as to why. She's not really a homunculus as those tend to lack personality and golems are in the same boat but more sturdy. I don't really have a word to describe it. Not sure atm but I'll figure something out.
Also figured I'd share this with you guys. Google docs editing fun ftw
Chapter 28 - The Best
Twilight’s dragon bone dildo (no r63 here[but Peppy likes futa {No! (but, but...[I said no! {sadface(*whispers*She really had a real penis*whispers* [What was that? {Oh, nothing don’t you mind me. Just off in La-la Land (Mmhmm...., Right. [*snickers*{You know... the readers are going to be confused as shit, right? (I don’t think they’ll mind. We are quite lulzy after all. [Hmm... Quite] ) } ] ) } ] ) } ] ) }so he’ll imagine it that way]) flew through the air and raped Nightmare hard in the ass so hard she exploded. Twice. The End.
nuff said
A bit of fun with Peppy, writing the next chapter. I'm bold, he's underlined.
Chapter 28 - The Best
Twilight’s dragon bone dildo (No r63 here [but Peppy likes futa so he’ll imagine it that way {No! (but, but... [I said no! {*sadface* (*whispers*She really had a real penis*whispers* [What was that? {Oh, nothing don’t you mind me. Just off in La-la Land (Mmhmm...., Right. [*snickers* {You know... the readers are going to be confused as shit, right? (I don’t think they’ll mind. We are quite lulzy after all. [Hmm... Quite] ) } ] ) } ] ) } ] ) } ] ) flew through the air and raped Nightmare hard in the ass. So hard she exploded.
Twice.
The End.
Nuff said.
Edit: 192399
Damn it, Peppy. You beat me to it.
Wonder if Nightmare would complain much if Twilight dominated her in bed........lust can bring out part you didn't know you had................
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192399>>192413
Fortunately, I think we can all agree on what twi's magic dragonbone dildo will look like:
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It's perfect.
192806 Hah hah oh Reb, hoo long are ye gonnae be bringing up thae fishing jokes? Noo ye've got me speakin in Dave's accent
Anyways not much I can say in regards to the story that good old Janus hasn't already. So instead how about I do another Character Overview?
~Moon Beam~
Some music to set the mood link
Moon Beam when first mentioned was alluded to simply being Nightmare's most loyal and powerful servant. At the time most of the readers likely assumed Moon Beam would be a full grown Stallion or Mare. A cold but stoic Warrior of the night, or maybe even another lover. Instead Peppy surprised a few of us by showing off Moon Beam as a little filly. Who happens to have a split personality and terribly powerful abilities.
She soon warms up to Twilight and becomes a ray of sunshine/(moonlight?) in Twilight's life, making her life much more tolerable. Moon Beam is full of energy and D'awwwwwww . She's quick to make friends and play with everyone she meets. She can also switch personalities in an instant as shown when the Royal Guards surrounded her, Nightmare and Twilight.
Moon Beam is shown as very creative when it comes to using her powers, ranging from becoming a shadowy trap on the ground to kill five dragons or turning into a giant vulture or a dragon. Oddly enough this reminds me a little of some of the newer series of Pokemon my nephew watches where the pokemon trainers use Pokemon powers in new and creative ways.
Moon Beam has a certain infectious lovability that seems to infect the readers and characters. She breaks through Cloudy Horizons cold hard exterior and latches onto Twilight as an Auntie and later a Mother if what Nightmare and Twilight were discussing is any indication. Everyone loves Moon Beam, even Brook, though perhaps Gilda is a little more reluctant but she's barely had time to get to know her.
Back to the split personality. It seems like Moon Beam has a built in split personality, which normally reacts to violent situations and takes over. Angrily destroying threats and taking great pleasure in doing so. Nightmare Moon can call on this alter-ego at will as evidenced before the battle of New Mareland. The alter-ego seems to have some of Moon Beams filly side seeping in as it listens to Twilight on two separate occasions when asked to stop and saves Cloudy during the battle.
After the battle when the Griffon assassin strikes, Moon Beam is paralysed with fear, she was unable to act in Nightmare or Twilight's defence and promptly passed out from the scene she witnessed. This would probably have been even more traumatic for her had Twilight not lived but it had some lasting effects as she almost killed Gilda on sight.
With the latest revelation of Moon Beam being a Homunculus formed from the remains of a Filly and traces of her soul + the body of Luna's beloved doll and a piece of Nightmare's soul we now know how Moon Beam was born and why she loves Nightmare Moon so much. She was born of Nightmare Moons soul and a desire she had for a filly of her own. I can only imagine how polarizing this must have been for Celestia when she learned what her sister had done. She probably saw Moon Beam as both a sad victim and an abomination of magic and nature (So narrow sighted, Celestia. Discord would probably approve though. )
With Cherry Tart around the castle, and little Moon Beam likely to become a close friend I wonder about a few things. Can Moon Beam physically grow like a normal filly? Granted she isn't exactly a Golem or Homunculus, she's unique and she does eat and sleep like a normal Filly. If she doesn't grow older physically, then what implications could this have for her? Will she become alienated from Ponykind, doing her best to suppress the growing unease of how everything but herself and her two mothers change?
So many questions linger, but we all know Peppy will answer them in time... maybe
Character Overview brought to you by...
Tonto The Trotter
I don't know what idea I like better Mistress Twilight tending to her Queen's needs, or the idea of the two of them sharing the dragon bone dildo to try and reach release at the same time.
Anyhow are the Minotuar of the Desert and Mountians allied with each other or are they just on good terms? Also I wonder if they'll end up stopping by Zebrica on the way back to Equestria or if Nightmare will be content to have the admittedly effective and incredibly intimidating Minotuars working with her at the moment?
One more thing... Nightmare Moon's expression at the idea of Dragonbone Dildo
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193133
Check the Hearth's Warming Day chapter. There it states that Moonie's magic is starting to develop, and she uses it to open her gifts.
So it would seem she does change as time goes on.
193134
Small clarification.
It's Zebria, not Zebrica.
193133
From the recent info into what Moon Beam is, I would assume that she doesn't really have a split personality. It's more like a split soul. The filly soul is Moon Beam as she usually is and the fragment of NMM's soul is her dark side.
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Your a sick, sick man.
193133 Yay <3 Love your character reviews. Can't answer those yet though. Cause that'd be no fun.
193134 Zebria is further to the east/southeast. So they wouldn't be going there on the way back. Not saying it won't happen, but just explaining it
193167 In due time my friend. In due time.
Tonto, Nice character review it really shows how much Moon Beam has changed throughout the story not just in terms of how she developes as a character but how we the readers responed to her from when her name was first dropped to her latest inneractions with Cherry tart.
Also i'm sure that Nightmare wore that expression throughout the majority of her latest stratigy meeting with Twilight.
193212 They certainly got a lot accomplished in that Strategy Meeting didn't they? I'd say that was certainly the best strategy meeting in the history of any existence ever.
Dr. jekyll, my mistake.
Peppy, Ah well can't let spoil anyone's fun with a lucky guess can you? Oh and yeah it seemed that they were both on the same page durring that meeting it really shows how much you can get done when you're willing to work very closely with your team. I'm sure that the insights and information that came from this meeting will have far reaching effects not just on the war but the future of Equestria as a whole for years yet to come.
193243 I wouldn't doubt it. Two great minds coming together to further the goals of their country. Couldn't get any better in my opinion.
193233 I will gladly accept your offering of internets
Peppy, Indeed if they keep up this level of cooperation nother will stand in thier way and the world will be a far better place for it! All hail the Shining Moon! All hail the Guiding Star! Let them lead us into a new era of unending prospairty!
Okay I'm going to stop this running joke now. It's a bad sign when an inundo running joke morphes into a psuedo improve progaganda slogan.
193347 Lol Propaganda through innuendo. We have found our new war posters
192399
For just Twilight or does it also not make a difference to the Queen?
Keep Calm
and
Canter on!
For the glory
of the new
Lunar Empire!
Pluck a pidion,
buy
war bonds today!
The moon shines upon us!
The stars guide our path!
Victory is ours!
Eh sorry couldn't think of much else in the way of propaganda posters.
I'll refrain from a fish joke... this time.
Really enjoyed this chapter(In more ways than one)! We get some minotaur sarcasm, and everything!
I want that bath, too. Ponies included?
almost ready for my next story, but my comp will be gone for I have no idea how long, and I need mood music for the setting (of the story)! tell me watcha like:
Song 1
Song 2
(insert 3rd fast paced song here)
bleggghhh, the all important waiting part. I'll have too.....
*rummaging through mind for non-fish joke*
Screw it, get out the next chapter!
193542
This.
Why is this fic so good?!?!
193669 Because pony sex. Dunno. Couldn't tell ya
193542 The motley crue song. Kickstart my heart.
193584
What I would listen to...
When I want to hear music made from Glass Glass Harp
When I want to listen to something random Amazingly awesome Amazing Horse
When listening to a dog singing Slayer Otherworld
I found something that would serve as the perfect alternate ending pic for this story.
Edit the story as a whole not this chapter... I'll just go back to writing my story now...
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195197
Ah yes, TwiLunEstia.
Obviously Twilight is worried they will ask her to pick whom she likes better afterwards, which could be quite dangerous.
195259 Pfffft. Dangerous. Pull a discord and say: Buck this I'm banging you both!
195197 You have inspired me to write a clop story involving Celestia Twi and Nightmare. It'll be done eventually. Not soon possibly, but eventually.
195307 Don't thank me Peppy, thank the magic of Deviant Art... and the fimart group there. Honestly I was actually surprised this was in the group most of the art they make is pretty tame. Like those Garry's mod comics I find myself reading (Why are they so addictive dammit )
Anyways, Yay Celestia, Nightmare and Twilight. I can totally see it now...
"This was a wonderful idea" Nightmare Moon Purred softly into the Byzantium Mares ear before nipping it.
"Oh yes I agree sister, my most faithful student. It's time you experienced what two Goddesses can do." The tall form of Celestia was curled up around Twilight along with Nightmare Moon.
Twilight let out a soft Meep before Celestia began sucking on her horn, the sensation sending jolts of pleasure to her brain. Nightmare Moon wrapped Twilight's body gently in her mane alongside Celestia's, gently massage the mare as she continued to nip Twilight's neck, moving up to her mouth.
~End of Tease~
I'm so cruel
195307
Yes, but she has not yet overcome her fear and achieved inner peace to do that. Just a bit longer though...
Heh as awsome as that clop fic is, I'd also like to see how things ended up that way. I can't imagin Celestia being to happy that her sister got to Twilight first when it looks like Celestia was clearly grooming her for the position of consort. that would be a sight to see wouldn't it?
193331He he.....coming together.......
195911 Yup
A good chapter in content and detail.
However, there was a lot of repetition in word usage starting at the clop section.
I'm guessing your second editor doesn't care for the clop. :P
Okay here we go the latest installment of sounding in the dark.
The Everfree Forest was a place unlike any other in Equestria. It followed it's own rules the flora, fuana, and wheather attened to themeslves. It was home to strange and exotic forms of life from the mighty Ursa Majore to the deceptivly inocent Poison Joke. Most beings pony or otherwise avoided this place for these reasons amung others, do it the vast size of it and the alure of what it held within there were those who were drawn to it for reasons all thier own.
One suck being is a Unicorn Pony by the name of Beeker. Who was on his way out of the forest in question as he exited the forest he became visible to the naked eye. He had a coat of deep brown fur that allowed him to blend in with the trunks of the mighty trees of the forest, his short main and tale were a dark green that further helped him blend in. There were three things that made him stand out from his surroundings one were the two hydra fangs he had strapped to his forlegs used both to clear his way through the underbrush and for self defence. Next was his eyes the were a brillent orange akin to glowing flames, finaly there was his cutie mark witch stood out because of it's simplicity. it appeared to be a veil yet it was so thin as to seemingly be absent.
"... The more I learn the less I like this situation, I KNEW that I should have ben in town for the Summer Sun Celibration this year. Something felt, wrong but i just couldn't pry myself away from the forest. Well time to learn what kind of mess I've landed myself in this time, hopefully I can find somepony willing to talk to me for a change of pace." He wearly scolded himself having had this conversation many times over the last few weeks. He reviewed the little information he had to himself as he moved forward tword Ponyvill.
'Okay so first off, the Sun didn't rise on the big day, then the animels started to act oddly timberwolves merging into larger packs and becoming far more territorial then normal, then the manticores became more aggressive, nocturnal plants started to grow in abundence. That was what got me I just couldn't pull myself away from this surge in plantlife magical, mundane, nocturnal, or durial. It was just too unprecidented I had to KNOW why this was happening. Still that's not a reason that's an excuess. Much as i hate to admit it I can get just as absorbed in my work as Phile, Atom, and Electra do. I wonder just what my curousity has cost me thought.' He mused as strode into town noticing how diffrent yet similar things were. While the town's ponies still went about thier daily tasks they seemed to lack the energy they normaly had as they did so. Conversation flowed abit less freely fewer ponies had a spring in thier step, looking more downtrodden, and the most startling to him was that not once had he been sent the normal apprehensive looks he tended to get whenever he wandered into town from the forest.
Putting his thoughts aside Beeker made his way to the town square intending to catch one of the Apple family at thier stall before they headed back home for the evening. It seemed that luck was on his side this night as he spotted Macintosh closing the stall for the evening. While all of the local Apples were kinder to him then most as he was a fairly regular customer it was Macintosh and Granny Smith who treated him the best, the latter because she had braved the Everfree far more then most and the former because they both could talk to each other without uninteninaly intimidating each other both having roughly the same build and all.
When he was close enough Beeker spoke up."Good evening Mac, I'm not catching you at a bad time am I?"
"Nope, in fact Ah was wondering when you'd turn up 'round here, you cost me five bits by the way Ah didn't figure you'd notice for a few more weeks yet." Mac joked as he loaded up the baskets of leftover apples onto his back.
"There are limits even to my selective obliviousness Mac. Granted it took a rather tempermental swarm of parasprites and a mnaticore but still I finaly tore myself away. So care to fill me in on what i missed while i was gone?" Phile replied as he began to trott longside Macintosh his curousity maniging to push aside his apprehension of the situation for a bit.
"Well, you hearda Nightmare Moon haven't ya?" he began oausing to let Beeker nod his confermation before he continued."Turns out that she ain't just an ol' mare's tail. she showed up durring the Summer Sun Celebration and took over. No Pony noes how she did it but she did. the sun hasn't risen scince then. First things were mighty rough not only was the sung gone but the plants started to suffer after a few weeks the moon just, changed suddenly fer part o' the day it started becoming brighter enough to keep the plants growning but not enough to banish the darkness." Mac paused once more to allow Beeker to absoreb the information he was hearing, and to collect his witts as well.
"By, the druids! I... I always brushed those old stories off as just that. Kinda punts Nightmare Night into a new light though makes me wonder if she really does eat foals and all that." No sooer had the words left his mouth then Beeker had struck himself with his own forhoof. "Argh I can't believe I just said that! I'm a stalion of scince damn it! Er, anyway would you please continue I don't see our new ruler going unapposed even as peacefull as most ponies tend to be." He said repromanding himself before seeding the floor to Macintosh once more.
"Eeyup from what Ah've heard there were sevreal attempts on Nightmare Mon's life not a one worked either. Bout a week ago there was even an attack on her castle by the royal guard. That didn't pan out either aside from Queen Nightmare Moon an her comander ther weren't any serviors to come from that mess, least none Ah've heard of at any rate." Macintosh continued never breaking his steady stride back to the family farm. he remained silent letting Beeker come to grips with what he'd just heard. In less dire times he'd be amused to finaly see the large Unicorn next to him take something aside from his work seriously for once.
"... This is just, I don't know how to process all of this. Celestia's gone and the sun with her. In her stead we have what i'd always thought to be a creature of myth and legend. I can only guess at how this everlasting moonlight will effect the world at large. I'll admit I'm a recless fool, heck I'm only alive right now because I've got some of the most incredible luck around yet even I think that the Everfree is becomig to dangours to venture into now! Well, go ahead and drop the other hoof Mac, you gave me time to meditat upon that last bit for a reason so what's the real bad news in all of this." Beeker said his tone flat and somber.
"...The bad news is that her highness has issued a draft to all able bodied ponies, it seems that we're at war with the griffons now. Refusing the darft is allowed only if ya have foals to take care o' otherwise the penelty fer going agenst orders, is death." Macintosh said his words heavy with resignation. there was a dull thump behind him so he turned and saw that beeker had fainted dead away on the road only a few dozen yards from the entrence to sweet Apple Achers.
Phile ambled his way into the backstage area of the boxtrott. He heard the abrupt scilnce of a hastily hushed coversation as he entered the room. No sooner had he closed the door then he felt somepony colide with him entangling him in a tight embrace nearly cuasing him to topple over. Dropping his walking stick and wrapping his hooves around the pony he now reconised as Trebble he hesitently asked the qwestion on his mind. "... What's happened?"
"It's the draft kid. We've all been selected to serve in Queen Moon's army. it looks like you're going to be the one left to hold down the fort while we're gone." Nate responed trying his best to be strong for his young friend's sake.
"W...When do you all leave?" Phile inquired inspite of his breaking voice.
"Tomorrow, we're going to have to gather on the strip with the rest of the recruites and board an airship to New Mareland for a brief check in after that we'll be shippoed off to either Canterlot or Cloudsdale for training." Quarter Note snarled voicing his fury at the whole situation.
"This is disgusting! it is bad enough that we must heed our new ruler and her reckless whims! Now we're to be her fodder in some struggle with the griffons! Does she know or even care that most ponies are not ment for combat?! I will admit that the griffons are the agresser here really it was only a matter of time before those brutes declaired war! however that does not mean that the populas should be sent off to the killing feilds! She put down the royal guard why can't she do so again with the griffons!" Watlz screamed her rage pouring off her in waves as she ranted. "I will not KILL I promised myself when I was a filly that i WOULD NEVER TAKE A LIFE! No, I'll do anything but that I refuse to do so! I will not become my father!" She thundered her horn shooting off white sparks to punctuate her statment.
"... Your father was in the guard?" Phile asked inspite of her current state of mind he was courus about Waltz. she never spoke of her life before she joined the orchestra never let anyone see what her cutie mark was either they all had just assumed it was related to music because of her skill with composition.
"No, he did not have the honor of serving Celestia in that way. father was a corener and mortician. the dead fasinated him! he talked to them as he worked upon them seeming to have real conversations with them. This seemed to spark his intuition as he has yet to missdiginose a cause of death, or ot fail to preserve the departed! though for all his insight into the dead he had little love for the living only talking to mother and I at meals or worse yet when he was forcing us to learn his craft! He wanted me to follow in his hoofsteps said that together the both of us might even find a way to make the dead walk once more!" Here she pasued to catcher her breath befor continuing her voice while still keeping an eligent quality to it had a venomus timber as well.
"I studied medicen as a way to both playcate father so I could talk with him and so i could find a way to save the ponies of the world from his calous hooves! My talent isn't music it's medicen! While I'm not on the level or Copperhorn or the 'Good Doctor' I could be working in my choice of clinics right now! but it wasn't untill after I'd earned my mark that I learned that no pony lasts forever, yet a truely magnificent work of music could! Look at the classics Motzart, Bach, Chopan, and more! thier works live on to this day! So while I kept my skills in medicen sharp in case i ever needed them i focus the majority of my enrgy into music from that day forward! I vowed that i would not become my father nor would I aid him in his vile qwest by supplying him the bodies he needed! I intend to keep that vow,! Even our Queen can see the need for a good doctor so I will see to it that my skills are put to thier proper use!" After her peace was said Waltz broke down into heaving sobs her composure forgotten in the heat of the moment. Nate was at her side in an instent a wing wrapped securly around her as he let the distruaght mare weep into his shoulder.
"... This is why she didn't like to get involved in our petty squabbles." Quarter note said tiredly "it brought back memories she would rather leave forgotten."
"...Phile." Trebble strated "I'm going to come back to you Phile, and you had BETTER be here when I get back." She finished pulling herself away from him abit to look into his face.
"I...I... don't know if i can keep that promis Trebble." Phile began " I can however promis you that i will do my best to keep the spirt of the brigade alive while you all are gone. I'll see to it that Waltz's newest works arn't forgotten even if it kills me! Come the debout in two weeks the critic's won't have room enough in the papers for the prais they'll be pouring out upon that performance!" he declaired once more tightly embracing her.
"Speaking of preformences we're on in five so be'd best get out on stage and get ready the show must go on and all that. Got to blow them away with one last show befor Phile has to carry on by himself" Quarter exclaimed his vigor for the craft helping the rest to put aside thier worries for the moment as they walked on stage and took thier places.
Hours later it was an emointaly and physicaly tired Phile that staggered his way into his home. the performance had been a smashing success and they even went on to preform an encore for the crowd. Once the normaly subdued crowed had been calmed down from thier excited state the members of the brigade went there speret ways for the night. Though Trebble refused to let Phile go without a parting kiss telling him that she had something important to say once she got back from the war.
Though it wasn't the pleasent thought about Trebble's heartfelt good by that lingered at the forthought of his mind right now. Nor was it his promis of keeping the spirt of the group alive and the pressure that would cause him. No what dominated his thoughts at the moment was the contents of a note attached to his door by a dagger. it was short and simple but no less chilling because of this. 'You had better hope that the city guard locks you away because otherwise we'll make you pay. signed the White Wolves.'
Grim news indeed while he felt better having an idea as to who it was following him eiler now he had to wonder just what they intened for him. While the White Wolves was one of the more imfamous gangs that worked in the shadows of Las neighas that didn't mean they had free lease to do as they pleased. the City guard had a long standing conflict with them epsecaily after a good deal of the more currupted officers had been cleaned out a few years ago. Yet he wasn't exactly safe in thier hooves either as they seemed intent on nailing him to the wall. Some choices either be at the mercy of the less then pure city guard or under the heel of some or the more cutthoart dimond dogs and ponies in the city. Truely his only hope was her highness and considdering the draft and it's strict punishment for refusing he didn't like to think about his odds at the moment.
196604 Am I sensing phile is going to join? Going to be difficult with the lack of sight I believe, but I think he can do it. Go Trebble~ Go Trebble~ Bang the blind guy! Seriously though. Bang the blind guy.
Peppy, I hadn't really thought about him attempting to join but to be honest, magic or no He's F4 through and through. I just can't see him being fit to servic. Granted he can pull off some damn scarry magic but after that he's just a liability to those around him plus you have the issue of mobility to deal with and as chaotic as up close melee combat like this war would be yeah that'd be a bad end for him.
Heh yeah Trebble knows what she wants and she intends to get it though at the moment there's a bit of a speed-bump in that road. Through I think with a bit of luck she might just make it out of this alive. After all she has a promis to keep.
Did i go too over the top with Waltz? I didn't think about it at first but now her backstory is kinda niggling at me for that very reason. Heck I'm also wondering if i overplayed Beeker abit too. Either way this is just me having some fun and venting my creativity abit well in a slightly diffrent way then my normal walls of text.