Nightmare Moon survives the Elements' power and takes Twilight as her prisoner. Now, the alicorn queen must establish her monarchy and defend her rightful place as queen against those that oppose her.
Page generated in 0.022 seconds
Total duration
754 users online
1,050,995 hits today, 2,205,040 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Hmm lot's of potentical forshaodwing here. An excilent chapter as always.
Wall-O-Text!
What I'm most intrested in seeing is how Ponyvill will react to the upcomming caravan. Throw in that Twilight and Tyra will be quite visible within it along with the stormcloud they'll be walking under the whole way and I think we have plenty ready for impendind drama! Or comedy. Itreally depends on weather Peppy decides to pull a Brain Clevenger or not and smack us with a surprize antie Climax. We know he's evil enough to do so.
Anyway I quite liked the character bits here. The way that Cherry Tart tried to sneak along because her adoptive mother would be gone and how intmidating castle Mareland can be. Twilight deciding to slog things out with the troops rather then act the part of a pampered royal. Even her unease about the whole situation felt right for her.
The talk she had with Nightmare about her worries conrencing be gone so long, her reaffirmed deadication to her lover and her promising to come back along with Moonie even though she would rather that her escort not throw themselves upon enemy swords as Nightmare put it to ensure her safety. All and all a nice little breather chapter that promiese much to come.
Wall-O-Text!
Wait. DAMMIT! I didn't see the "Clop-Lite" at the top of the page!