Well, I am going to be completely honest first off. I can't draw, like at all. Stick figures look like balloons. It's bad. When I was trying to picture what these characters all looked like in this universe, I did about a 2 day binge on deviantart. Was quite fun. Found a lot of stuff that I love and thought was great for the visualization of the characters. SO what I am going to do is post all the pictures that I use to derive the visual for the story.

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Whelp, it's up. I just am going to go pass out. Too many memories relived to get the depression and anger needed to fuel this one.

I derive a lot of Crisp's emotions from events that had happened to me. This chapter revolves around a very dear friend to me that I lost eight years ago.

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Ok, so two weeks ago I said that I was editing the story, which is true. My friend and editor and and I are going over everything in google docs and will be tweaking the chapters as they finish.

Now on the real problem. It has been 6 weeks since I posted last, and that shit does not fly with me. A lot of my life got away from me over these last several weeks and now that it has calmed down, I can sit down and go to town with this chapter.

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Sooo I know I said I was going to post last Friday, and I really had everything ready to go. But then something occurred, something strange, something different.... I got an editor.

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Well, I am pleased to say that Ch 27 is almost done, just some fine tuning, but as we all know that could mean anything from a couple of hours to another month. My plan is to have it done and post it sometime Thursday.

I wanted it to go up sometime last week but a few things happened that kind of put large kinks in my plan.

1. I had to actually study a lot of anatomy of birds (specifically hawks and falcons).

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My story has reached 300 views. Over seven months... Oh well, it's not a promoted story and a far lesser story than the ones that update more regularly. It is, however, interesting to think that 300 different people, accounts, robots, sentient cows and others have read this little piece of crap.

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BAHAHA It's finally up. DEAL WITH IT. BRING ON THE DISLIKES!

Also, really happy with this chapter, even if it is a bit shit.

Tie ins and all the loose ends being all thrown together, making a crazy web of what the shit is going on.

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Bwahahaaha It is I, Crispn, your favorite worst writer on FIMfiction.net.

I am here the bearer of news....Bum bum bum.

One, I haven't slept in two weeks. And what I mean by that is I have crashed but never fallen asleep. I crash for a couple hours a day at most.

Two, I got some job type things. Yay money. Now I can resume buying my pony comics.

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Quaaaaaaa?

Yes, I have a new story, possibly just a small one shot, in the process. It will be a small little romantic story with a slightly more interesting twist on it, starring Twilight, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie. It should be out sometime this week so all I can do is ask for patience.

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Saw Equestria Girls on saturday. I am going to say this now, I haven't paid to go see a movie in almost 3 years. Because I'm a college age adult with access to the internet. Money Well Worth Spent. Absolutely fucking loved it. Just Everything about it made me happy. The story was well done and the characters were just as fun in human form as they were in pony. The whole sequence of Twilight attempting to appear "human" was just about the funniest shit I have ever seen. The best part

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