Chop, Chop, Chop, watch those words drop. · 6:43am Feb 27th, 2014
So I'm doing another editing pass over Through Ice and Shadow, and I would really love some more feedback (seriously, I haven't received much beyond like three people) before I get too far into it. So if you have read the story, just leave a comment here or on the story proper. Thanks!
So far I have moved a few parts for a better opening hook, tell me what you think.