Maybe saying that I will post my book wasn't such a good idea. It will take a long time before I can effectively rework it into an idea that can be posted on here. Certain problems such as naming the planet "North", naming Queen Forma and King Pensi and specifying an anatomy that is unique to the novel are going to be difficult at best. I see only a few things in the beginning chapters that will easily carry over. Those things include the physics, the Sunmark Alliance technology, the Koian