i was playing some chambers in the perpetual testing DLC and had to laugh at other world's cave johnsons.
then i thought: what would an Equestrian cave say?
"Welcome, gentlemen, to Aponyture Science. Lunar princesses, Royal Guards, Wonderbolts--you're here because we want the best, and you are it. So: Who is ready to make some science?"
"Now, you already met one another on the limo ride over, so let me introduce myself."
"I'm Cave Digger. I own the place."

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i give up slightly.
i do realize that it is indeed too fast paced right now at the beginning so i will be re-writing it.
perhaps start with a single point of view.
still have not chosen a editor/formatter yet but when i do i will send them the url for the pastebin.
untill then know that it will be re-written yet not lose anything. (hopefully)

i need someone to edit and fix my new TCB story.
i dont want to overstress ray10k (who is a god i just want to add) by have him work on TCB: SG and TCB:NU:NLR plus working on his own storys as well (check him out! you wont regret it)
so basically i need someone who can take my cave scratchings and turn them into a literate peice of art.
if you want to "apply" just send me a fixed version of chapter 1 of NLR and i will pick the best one.

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i was just listening to a few songs.. and noticed
we have songs for a few famous FIM fictions.
Cupcakes, Rainbow factory, Cross and an arrow, Daring do, and others.

but no Conversion bureau song.

now as i am a story writer (and not a very good one.. just the idea guy really) i cant make a song.

so if anypony wants to take the challange and come up with a song for the TCB.. that would be beyond cool
like 20% past rainbow dash cool.

i went back though and each episode (not chapter, episode) now has sort of a "theme song"
if you think a diffrent song would be better then send me a youtube url and i will give it a listen.

for those who are in the St George area not this friday but next friday and saturday i invite you to come to Fannatiku Fest. an anime festival i go to.
not really pony related but fun none the less.

i went back through my chapter and i could not find anything wrong.. now this could be because it all seems right in my head.
eather way i will be back writing tomorrow and hopefully i dont mess up more.. although i am likely it will happen..

i joined the conversion bureau story group..
and i went to go post my story..
well..
it was already there.
i dont know who did it (thank you!)
but the fact that it is there means it is good enough to be concidered part of the storylines..
it was also in the "highest" rated part so that is doubly good.
i am freaking out like rainbow dash meeting the wonderbolts because my story/rays fixing is hanging out with the big names of the TCB universe.
Chat, midnight, anonsi, windchaser..

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http://www.change.org/petitions/hasbro-studiosthe-hub-do-not-change-derpys-name#

for those of you who watch my "The Conversion Bureau: St George" fan fic you notice it is a little..
messy.
mainly because i forget capitals and punctuations and even lose the point of view with too many variables.

so here is what i need (please)
i need someone to scan through and proofread and fix any mistakes i have from the mast chapters so it flows a little better.

if you know anyone or want to help just send me a message.