Crap I hit the wrong button. Sorry if you saw an unfinished product of my story.

While reading my story, I had a few errors I need to correct. The first is the lack of detail, going too fast, and some issues with personality of my main character. To fix these issues and to post on EqD (they don't look at stories, they read what has been submit), I'm going to rewrite this story. These changes are due to you my followers and the people who favorite my story. I won't let you down.