Well, it was out fir a while...but it's finished now. Sorry for such a long wait, it's not easy to write a fan-fic when grounded. :
Ah well, hopefully you ponies are enjoying this...I tried harder in school for this. >:c ( Yes....I know...I should have been trying hard to get good grades in the beginning, but hey...I'm doin' this for you... )

Yes, I know these chapters are chopped up and unfinished, but trust me...I'll get it done! Though I dont think many of you will enjoy it...also I would love love love loooooovee some feed back, like...if you want me to continue...I dont want to get carpal tunnel -and- a bunch of unsatisfied ponies....but yeah, please tell me your opinoin on how you think this is turning out...'d love to see what people think about it.

And honestly I don't think much of it, I don't have much experience in this, so please forgive me if anything looks odd or out of place! It's not easy writing a good fan-fic...! Anyways, criticism is needed, I must know how to get better...I have the need to perfect!