Please help me touch up my story grammerwise.

Hey guys, as we know my new story is definitely better than my first story. I have some ideas, but the timing has just been wrong. So there may not be a new chapter for some time.

My ratings on Alone don't quite impress my, so I'm gonna quit that story unless you want me to finish it.

Flutter-snipe

YOURE GOING TO LOVE ME!!!

Alright, Stage 10 is finished. Finally.

Umm, my ratings on this story keep getting worse, what do i need to fix?

I AM SO FUCKING BORED.

*MESSAGE TO ALL READERS* Chapters may take some time, as I am back in school. they will be finished though.