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Criticul


May
17th
2012

Writing Tip #5 · 3:00am May 17th, 2012

I bring yall a treat today - A writing tip written by somebody who is actually competent. Deceased

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Alright, so it’s your boiii Deceased here, and I’m here to talk to you about figurative language.

You got that, bro? We’re dropping all the literal shit and moving into the nitty-gritty of metaphors and similes and all that good stuff.

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May
17th
2012

Blargh · 12:08am May 17th, 2012

While I'm working on the all's fair revamp, I'm going to try something new: If you want to, you can write up a plot sheet, send it to me, and I'll write that fucker. I'll write it to death and back. No clop, I've already got one in my que. No gore, that disgusts me. Anything else is fair game.

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May
15th
2012

For those of you... · 1:21am May 15th, 2012

Who have been following me long enough to remember the story All's Fair...

Somebody has convinced me it was wrong to delete a complete story, so I'm going to be reuploading that some time in the future.

And as an apology I will be completely tearing it apart, making it a hundred times better.

<3

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May
14th
2012

Equestria Daily Feature · 6:07pm May 14th, 2012

May
12th
2012

Oh my... · 1:09am May 12th, 2012

Well, I'm currently in the process of writing another one shot -- as I said last blog -- but it evolved into something I thought I'd never write. That's right folks, your favorite author (pshhhh, yeah right) is now working on a clop fiction. Scary thought, right? That's besides the point, I'm sure there are plenty of people that will read, I'm just concerned with how well I'll be able to pull something like that off. Wish me luck, ponyfriends.

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May
11th
2012

Writing Tip #4 · 12:52am May 11th, 2012

This one was actually a request.

The dreaded Show vs Tell.

I know, you've probably heard this little spiel a million times over. Hopefully, I'll be able to organize this in a way that you'll understand what it truly means. So...prepare yourselves... I'm about to educate your asses.

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May
10th
2012

Working on a new one shot · 5:12pm May 10th, 2012

That I think most of my followers will enjoy. I really... 'got big' - even though I'm not exactly famous - from my romance stories. Well, guess what ladies and gentlemen! That's right, I'm currently working on a shipfic that I think you'll all enjoy. TWO, to be exact. One deals with a lot more of the psychological aspects of a relationship, and the other is going to be a lot of what I like to call fluff.

I'm doing the fluffy one first.

It's a Rarity Twilight story too. Woohoo :D

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May
9th
2012

Writing Tip #3 · 10:11pm May 9th, 2012

So, after reading a certain story that shall remained unnamed, I have decided to write the next tip early.

Oh, what could it possibly be about?!

Are we finally going to talk about inserting deep meanings into my story?!

Haha...I'm afraid not, children. You see, there is a greater menace lurking deep beneath the surface.

Original...Characters.

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May
7th
2012

What's that?! · 7:46pm May 7th, 2012

Your pal Criticul has a new story out?

Gasp!

Her Majesty Walks is out and ready for teh reading.

Let me know what ya think. xD

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May
6th
2012

Remember When update · 7:34pm May 6th, 2012

I'm going to finish that story myself. I've been thinking a lot recently, and I've put too much into that story to let somebody else do it. TheScarecrow won't be working on Remember When, I will. I'd feel dirty giving him it to him xP No offense to him or anything, he's still doing Remorse and (if he feels up to it) the LunaShy sequel.

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