No, I don't like how it came out. I might edit it later but for now, It will sit as is. Next chapter will take a while. Just warning you.

and as I'm sure some may have noticed, I'm trying to name chapters after something each of the Mane Six would say....... Not too original but meh, I like it.

That will teach me not to set up VNC before I leave for a 5 day vacation. A new chapter was set up to be posted Saturday but I didnt have the second chapter on my laptop and didn't set up VNC for my desktop. New chapter will be up soon.