Chapter two is online. Hope everypony likes it. I tried not to make the the guards dialogue too dry, but honestly I couldn't get into character as a guard. Hopefully it will come to me over time as I intend to use these characters again. What did you guys think about it?
Also this story needs an image. I'm trying to find a good artist that I can buy a commission from. Any leads and links on the matter will be much obliged.