ok I have a new beta, thank you sir, and I am happy to say I got 2k more words written today. Hope everyone has a great thanksgiving. :)

Hey everyone,

It seems that I've lost contact with my beta and I'm not sure when I'll be hearing back from him. I want to make sure I still put out decent work but I would feel better if I could bounce it off of some people before I go and post it. Is there anyone out there who would be willing to be a proofreader for me? Just send me a PM. Thanks in advance.

-Grev

I just started work on the next chapter and I've already gotten several thousand words in. While I am pleased with what I've doneI need to go back and do just a little bit more character development. hopefully I can make this chapter one that everyone can enjoy.

I made it to the front page, that's awesome! Thanks guys!

This afternoon or early evening, the next chapter drops.

Hey everyone. I'm sorry to say that the chapter isn't ready yet. I have had a very rough week with work and have hit a point that I have begun to question my career path in life. I still want to write this story but I have lost my drive for the moment. Its not going on hiatus...I just need to get my head on straight.

So I went back and reworked pretty much the entire chapter and I have to admit, I'm a lot happier with it. It doesn't feel forced to me now, which I hope means it is a better read for all of you. Hopefully I'll be able to have the chapter out by Thursday or Friday night. It just depends on what real life throws at me next. Until then guys, brony on. /)*(\ - Grev

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I know you guys want a new chapter soon and I'm about 6k words into the next chapter and I've hit a wall. I have to admit I'm having a pretty hard time writing a decently descriptive...activity. I am also having a hard time figuring out a good build up and aftermath. I don't suppose anyone has some suggestions that I could look at for inspiration would they?

Looks like somepony might not make it through next chapter....who could it be?